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Pu the Owl
Oct 2nd, 2002, 06:31 PM
Like the very first time to the world I open my eyes
I was dead and then without a reason I was reborn
Now tasting the chill of the wind I claim my vice
But there's something lost floating in memories torn

I wander to catch petals and leaves and merry perfumes
Immersing my head in those watery days of Fate
I'll call the name I cannot forget from ancient tunes
And someday I'll be back to your unknown shade

Come, come find me at the bottom of this wishing well
Till dawn fades floating remembrance's left about
Show me the way out from a solitary obscured shell
Confusion got me and I saw my dark sun burning out

Following the course of eternal seasons existance ain't a waste
Stuck to a fragment of inner stability, not living in haste.


Note: this a little unuseful poem written two years ago. I'm not used to fan fictions writing, so this is probably the only "fan fiction" I've ever written. It's not particularly good, maybe because my knowledge of English is quite poor for these purposes. I don't know. I'm not satisfied with it, but I found it in my hard disk and I thought to post it anyway. For those who don't know, Sir Fratley is secondary character from Final Fantasy 9.

Ruby Moon
Oct 4th, 2002, 06:30 PM
Your English is "poor"? Don't make me laugh :laugh:

Daedaelus
Oct 4th, 2002, 07:27 PM
lol Fortune, what are you talking about? You speak English very well.

Lost_myth
Oct 4th, 2002, 07:39 PM
Fortune, I'm blessing you with good english for the rest of your life. That explains why I'm getting worse. Gwah hahah...


Tight, I read it on thursday at school.

Ruby Moon
Oct 4th, 2002, 07:54 PM
Originally posted by Blue3vilx
Fortune, I'm blessing you with good english for the rest of your life. That explains why I'm getting worse. Gwah hahah...


Are you getting worse? Every writer in this forum must be mad or something, because I don't see it either :laugh:

Faile
Oct 5th, 2002, 02:48 PM
eeeeeeeeeeeee ! a fortune-writing !

a rarity to see one posted, but amazing always they are. you so should post more.

yes !

and your english is better than mine.

Pu the Owl
Oct 7th, 2002, 01:01 PM
WOW! Thank you so much for the comments!

Indeed...it's a rarity to see stuff from me posted here! Probably you won't see other writings in the future :P

Faile
Nov 24th, 2002, 07:39 PM
but we must !

Black Heart
Nov 24th, 2002, 11:22 PM
Why won't you post more? :confused:

Redpyramidhead
Nov 26th, 2002, 01:10 AM
I would have to say I was quite drawn into this poem and hung on to every single word. I think your English flows beautifully from word to word and speaks the story you tell in this poem masterfully. This character's story is already pulling on my heart strings! I'm very inspired to buy FF9 now. It's quite evident from your writing what an experience the storyline must be. I think this song should be in the game!


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