The Sword 4 Hire

[Sword 4 Hire]

The Sword 4 Hire



The light trembles on his skin

While the shadow's greet him eagerly

Rays reflected from the drawn blade

It's edge as thin as thread

Yet as deadly as the flames

The flames that burn within him

Concealed by the chain-linked armor

Armor impenetrible to your thoughts

Your wielded threats are reflected

Never touching him

Never confronting him

Never again will you see him

For you are down

Gasping for the air that he left you

Dim lights

Dim hope

Dim existence...

...

Contract Fullfilled...

[Lost_myth]

Nice... that was cool. I liked how you describe the whole thing about the blade.

[Hylas]

Very cool and well written!

[Darkness 4 Hire]

Awesome poem S4H, couldnt have done any better myself!!! :laugh: peace bro!

[Redpyramidhead]

I liked this poem. I like how you convey the sword as an extention of the fire within him and vice versa. And then there's the impenetrable armor, both in a physical sense as well as an emotional sense, cuz this is definately a guy who is dedicated to his work and knows the difference between these things. So, basically you describe things really well for your audience to get all that. keep 'em coming!

_RED_ stuff

[Sword 4 Hire]

Thank you