We 9-11

[AudioBoxer]

We take 2 steps back
We slip
We fall into my steep
We die
We think
We wish
We pray
We hope
We know it wont happen
We dont pay attention
We get hurt
We get hurt more than ever
We Fight back
We win
We celebrate
We forget
About the lives we lost!


do you like it?

[Black Heart]

Very simple poem, but sincere.
Nice one :)

[Beretta55]

pretty good poem i like it good job.

[Lost_myth]

I think that it actually sounds pretty good. I was confused at first, but then I read it out loud.


What was the message or the main thought of the poem?


I know you are thinking dumbass, it's about september 11. Would you care to explain it more?

[AudioBoxer]

Its more about, reg people that dont pay attention to what is happening in the world, Some people dont give a flying f*ck what happend! I do and most of us do. All it is saying nobody realizes how much of a flaw it is to loose a human being!

[Sword 4 Hire]

Very Nice