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Cannibal Clown
Jul 24th, 2002, 02:04 PM
I stare at myself from a puddle
at the bottom of a hole
seeing what i truely look like
dirty
stained
seeping away
wondering how it got so bad
all this time i got so sad
thinking i could be so glad
if i got back all i had
the friends who thought i was worth something
the people who once knew my name
before i earned all of this shame
because i was the one to blame
so now i see
what all they see
lonely standing over there
does anybody really care
of coarse they don't
not for me
they don't give a damn
sincelely
so again i see
that image of me
reflected in mud
in captivity

I know that i never write anything and actually post it here. But i conjured this up during a bit of idle time while talking to a friend. It seemed kinda good, so i copied and pasted it here, and wondering if you guys think it's worth the thread space.

Uchiha Sasuke
Jul 24th, 2002, 02:49 PM
Hey thats good CC but when are you put up those songs we made up at my house .

Hylas
Jul 24th, 2002, 02:57 PM
Hey! That's a quite good work, I think! I liked it!

Soul Angel
Jul 24th, 2002, 05:34 PM
That's really good Cannibal, I like it! :happy:
Keep it up! ;)

Cannibal Clown
Jul 25th, 2002, 11:08 AM
Originally posted by SSSnake
Hey thats good CC but when are you put up those songs we made up at my house .

When i write em down.

I still have to figure out how all of the lyrics are going to fit together. All i have are the ideas i came up with while winging it while in your garage. Nothing on paper yet.

007_JamesBond
Jul 25th, 2002, 06:52 PM
Do you think that you remember all the words to GUTTER BALL, that song will be a classic, lol and nice words CC I tip my hat to you

IcyMourdor
Jul 26th, 2002, 10:05 AM
Nice one Steve. You should keep on writing. I haven't wrote anything in a long time, oh well.

Gutter Ball, good times. SSSnake on guitar, 007 on drums, CC on vocals. One of the best times I've had with you guys. I think SSSnake has the words on some paper at his house.