The Ninja...a poem by yours trully

[Sword 4 Hire]

The Ninja

by: DJ Sword Master Flash

What will you do when the Ninja comes?
Comes knocking on your door
Breaking your sense of solitude
Till the silence is no more

Will you let it in and befriend it
Leaving caution to the wind
Or will you lock it out in the cold
And never let it in

It will be your best friend
Making all your problems right
And you will trust it for the moment
Then let it finish you in the night

What will you do when your ninja comes?
Will you invite to take its coat?
And turn your back for a second’s worth
Until there’s a shuriken in your throat…

[happy_doughnut]

Wow, another amazing poem !
Man, I hafta say, I really like the way you write ! I'm glad you decided to write some more 'cuz it's really great !

I find the comparison to be so true. Well, at least it is to me.
Using a Ninja in it was quite clever.
*sniffle* Again, very well done :happy: .

[kamari-ice]

An acrostic poem, KOOL!

[Beretta55]

awsome poem!!!

[Lost_myth]

Indeed...

[Ruby Moon]

Bizarre choice for the subject, but nice work :)

[Sword 4 Hire]

You have to dig deeper into the poem...

...it's not really about a ninja....

[Lost_myth]

Seems like a friend that has betrayed you. Don't trust strangers or something. Good meaning. Yes, you did do a good job. Indeed.;) ;) I'm not saying it just say it either. I really mean it. My favorite is still OMG I wrote a poem tho. :happy:

[Ruby Moon]

Saying bizarre choice for the subject I didn't mean "A real ninja is a strange choice"... :mad: maybe you misunderstood the sense of my post. Next time I'll choose more carefully my words.

[Sword 4 Hire]

Well Soooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy ;)

Yes it can be about friendship but I was talkin about love and how usually I'm the one hurt in the end...

[Soul Angel]

That's a really good poem S4H :happy:
I liked it, keep it up! ;)