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007_JamesBond
Jun 27th, 2002, 11:29 AM
Ok here it is I have come to a problem, I am curently writing a new story that I will post when it is finished, but I need to come up with a good tittle for it though

Here is the story line, guy gets new neighbors stormy night they break in, guy defends house kills one, rest get away, and instead of the guys breaking in getting arrested the guy was and, it shows how the system does not work, and the ending has an awsome twist to it

Help me with my tittle problem, thanks

happy_doughnut
Jun 27th, 2002, 02:28 PM
Ah, I'm not very good with tittles either but I'll try to help :)

Hmm, how about these :

Uncertain Devices
Broken Reliance
Law Bender
Hidden Rules
Unreliable
Profane Confinement

O.O''

Er... meh, sorry. I don't think I was of any help :disturb:

Qjij_jijQ
Jun 27th, 2002, 03:25 PM
Oh ! Don't say that Smelly Mena !
Those are really good ideas... trust me, I know. ;)

Corupted Dreams
End of Laws
Risky Business
Laws of the Jungle
System Failure
Political Boom ( Okay, lame one... :laugh: )

Well, I dunno either... I need my lil smelly Mena to tell me I did good ! :D
Where are you when I need you Honey Poo ?!?

Ice Cold
Jun 27th, 2002, 03:41 PM
I got one:

Urban Warfare

007_JamesBond
Jun 27th, 2002, 06:27 PM
keep them coming all the requests are very good and I am not quite sure which one I will pick so tell me more, thanks though

Qjij_jijQ
Jun 27th, 2002, 07:11 PM
Okay... I sense a crazy one comin'...

How about:

Crash of Tomorow's future

Yeah... Eh, never mind... maybe ?

DragonSphere
Jun 27th, 2002, 08:08 PM
Here are two titles that I thought of:

Shattered Justice
Immoral Liberation

happy_doughnut
Jun 27th, 2002, 10:33 PM
Aw... I think I need to delete mine. :disturb:
What a waste of space. :laugh:

Those tittles are great Qjij ! But you know... since you're SO wrapped up with Lillath, I don't want to bother you... http://imbiss-coding.de/smiliez.de/smz/trrg/trrg_16.gif

Beretta55
Jun 27th, 2002, 11:37 PM
the urban project
runaway
urban dreams
i know they are bad but i tryed though.

Qjij_jijQ
Jun 28th, 2002, 06:48 AM
Oh ! Little Mena ! I don't care about her at all...
You know there's only one smelly girl for me ! Plus, remember that we have somethin' very precious together... I think you know 'who' I'm talkin' about, right ? ;)

I have other title ideas:
Rules of Affliction
Above all Laws
Justice of the Streets

What do ya think ?

Lost_myth
Jun 28th, 2002, 10:50 AM
Here:

System of down... j/k

How bout:

Crimeless order

abstract rain

bad Frequency

disreputed system

obtain under false pretenses

the devil to pay

lawless doom

knocked down

crack of doom/ dawn of doom

effusion of blood

deathblow

suffocation

stealing fate

laws abstracting

eschatology (LOOK THIS WORD UP IN THE DICTIONARY IF YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT IT MEANS!!!)

one's doom is sealed

the grave closes over one

"the lone couch of this everlasting sleep" [Shelley].

"in adamantine chains shall death be bound" [Pope]

007_JamesBond
Jun 29th, 2002, 04:14 PM
How about The Lost Hope, I dont know yet they all are very nice, my disission is coming , lol

Faile
Jul 1st, 2002, 06:46 PM
morning star

shattered glass

broken days

haunted sun

The Rhythmosaur
Jul 4th, 2002, 09:09 PM
Though there are many good suggestions, I can´t help making one as well, because it is what came up to my mind emediately: What about:
Devil´s paradoxy switch ?

Lost_myth
Jul 17th, 2002, 12:23 AM
cold fusion
dangerous deeds
ice
turnup
Sharp blade
bang ur dead
darkness
let it rain
wetness
drained
Good things come in threes
No worries
blinded dreams
Kupo nuts
Flashing in the darkness
Skies of fire
Yo yo
Kilt it
Disable the mimes
disable the mines
Signature
Your Profile
Falling star
Options
No sleep
Eligible Killer
12:23 am

AsylumEscapee
Jul 17th, 2002, 12:59 AM
How about "A story written by a guy who had an idea about a story but his grammar sucks so itll probably be total crap when hes finally done writting it which will probably never happen anyway".

Sword 4 Hire
Jul 17th, 2002, 01:49 AM
or possibly...

"Escapee do us all a favor and turn off your computer"

Beretta55
Jul 17th, 2002, 01:50 AM
maybe i can do it for him? *goes off and turns escapee's computer and then blows it up* fun fun fun!!

AsylumEscapee
Jul 17th, 2002, 08:15 PM
Oh, gimme a break. It's true.

Lost_myth
Jul 17th, 2002, 08:50 PM
Get a life...:ghost:

AsylumEscapee
Jul 17th, 2002, 09:25 PM
Originally posted by Lost_myth
Get a life...:ghost:

Er.. Good one.

happy_doughnut
Jul 18th, 2002, 12:35 AM
Originally posted by AsylumEscapee
How about "A story written by a guy who had an idea about a story but his grammar sucks so itll probably be total crap when hes finally done writting it which will probably never happen anyway".

FYI : JB writes great stories.
There was no need whatsoever to come up out of nowhere and begin to bash him. Same goes for other members you might want to ' insult '.
If you don't have anything to say that is related to the thread, then you shouldn't post to that topic.

Please, correct yourself before you decide to begin to correct other members.

AsylumEscapee
Jul 18th, 2002, 01:11 AM
Ok... Enough. I've been warned, and corrected. My message retracted by others. Geez people, lighten up.

Beretta55
Jul 18th, 2002, 02:01 AM
fight!!! fight!!! fight!!!:evil: jk jk:laugh:

Lost_myth
Jul 18th, 2002, 01:29 PM
so 00 what do you think about the recent names I posted?

007_JamesBond
Jul 18th, 2002, 07:46 PM
thanks again everyone for your ideas

and asylum what is your problem?

AsylumEscapee
Jul 18th, 2002, 07:50 PM
Originally posted by 007_JamesBond
thanks again everyone for your ideas

and asylum what is your problem?

No problem.

Lost_myth
Jul 18th, 2002, 07:59 PM
lol

82 degrees

Unknown zone

message in a jar

UV pain

Run tito

007_JamesBond
Jul 18th, 2002, 09:06 PM
and it will be a good story too asylum, have you read my last one?

AsylumEscapee
Jul 18th, 2002, 09:42 PM
No. Have you read mine? Your story isnt on here.

007_JamesBond
Jul 19th, 2002, 09:02 AM
I have read yours, thats right only half of it is up the other half got deleated sorry, but that was a work of art, lol