Madruckis Jargon

[MADRUCKIS]

Well, I started this thread in Fan Fiction but I don't really think it has to do with that so I'll put it here. If anyone is able to write in free verse please feel free to put somethin' down-I just put stuff when I"m bored. This is the original post!
Yawnnn
yeah yeah, I know
Its been awhile since I started up in Fan fic, sorry been busy. I decided just to start a thread which I think people should try. I'll write in free verse what ever I feel at the time that I'm logged on. It's pretty good practice for a free style, which I don't do anymore-but my little brothers gotten into and makes me proud when he gets into poetry. well ummm lets see

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Sittin here, thinkin about the route I took be here
see here
I be there, hear the slight buzz of mostly mosquitos
ponderin about a bag of Cheetos-man I need those
crap! empty bag pass me those Doritos
Peepin the front line of this news
Nets net nothing but a new neighborhood knots
next stop
the nba finals
full of funnies garfeild and lionell
I'm gettin hazy, I'm lazy-my minds displaced me
erased the
amazin fact that its four
in the mourn
and I'm up but I'm out and I'm yawin'
man its freezin-close the window this ain't a barn in
an Orange Farm from folks forged from chosen armies
disarm me! please, my fingers blistering
while you readin this your really listening to me fallin alseep so I'll see yall next week

[Esjay]

*claps*


that was very nicely done :)

[MADRUCKIS]

thanx Esjay
this is the 2nd one I did
umm

I'm stuck
my seat is like a bucket of green muck
that my little brother distributes on and over all of my stuff
yellin and screamin
I'm believing he's a demon
forced of course
leavin out all of his Dragon Ball Z men
I'm trippin fallin
disgraced
I'm fallin on my face-tellin him
umm yellin that his socks by me are smellin displaced
please place them in a place where God can give 'em grace
and put the socks out of their misery
screw washing-they must be erased
I'm done
I'm tired
Yo boy your fired
Fired from being my brother-tell my mother to send the next hired
I'm done going full throttle-bottled up all inside of
me
gee it kinda sucks to be this boys role model

[Madd Skillz]

Good Job.....:ghost: :P :

[MADRUCKIS]

Thanx dog
You know my only weapons are my words so I gotta keep my sword sharp!

[Madd Skillz]

Yo Ruckis .....remember the PEN is Mightier than the sword....but if you were in samurai times which would you prefer...

[Pimp_Daddy507]

great job dogg

[Rohamgh]

eyo g, post yr rap toons on

www.spitboxer.com

it's like a rap community site.or kaysha.com.

[Pimp_Daddy507]

talkin to me rohamgh?

[Rohamgh]

actually to the first poster, but you can do that too ;)

[Pimp_Daddy507]

naw, ill jus kick it here in till i get banned by fortune.........

(btw, i WILL get banned eventually)

[MADRUCKIS]

Thanx
I'll look into the site, Rohamgh.

Hey Pimp_Daddy-at least you have a goal right, lol!

And Skillz, well! The way I think about it......
If I were in samurai times, I would pick a pen cause I would be Lord, King, Emperor Ruckis who would sign bounties on foes so I wouldn't have to get my hands dirty!

[Pimp_Daddy507]

I always have goals........:laugh:

[MADRUCKIS]

thats whats important pimp_daddy.

Alright heres some more

Sick
Naw man I'm flipped
Ribbed up and zipped
dipped in pink pure plastic slits
four more doors punchin out your loose floor boards
let in hordes of ant lords that brood in Mourdor
Yeah, naw
I don't like to carry a grooved sawed-off
use a crowbar to bruise yall new blue cars
don't do bars though 21-I choose your broads
Your far more flawed than my grandpa's jaw
which he lost bitin' bombs in your Veitnam War
Now he sips his meal like drinks through a foot straw
"Yo granpa , what u eatin-a bowl of applesauce?"
"Naw, ya grandma mashed all the steak, corn and peas hard"
Man dog thats raw
if you seen what I saw
you would line a fine line to the bowl to throw up
I'm tired of no luck
I'm mired with more muck
I'm sire-d,
now bow
I'm MADRUCKIS the III of Yorkshire

[Madd Skillz]

Yo son, relax you're too much for these cats .....nah f*&k that, keep it flowing....all hale to MADRUCKIS of Yorkshire.....

[MADRUCKIS]

Ahhhh
Thanks Mr. Skillz. Tried my hand at spibox and nearly got destroyed in the ring. I'm not an mc-I'm just someone who can use pen mightier than most men!
Heres what I posted against some guy named Acid! (censored)

Time for punch buggy rap. You bastard wear a sunny cap
cause my bright style will straight burn ur hair line for a fact
I'm duck tape-you scotch, people stuck f'd up in my style
while your mild almost unseen ability holds NATHAN
nuthin left to be desired
This must be a joke
you poke fun-I'll smoke dun
too bad you number two but this dude is the Chosen One
You and me battling-hope your screen got protective padding
your ryhmes are straight to cassette-my lines are for dvd formatting
check the menu, peep the reveiws, free the preveiws
after this sadistic sh!t your soul will leave you
cleave you-me I'll decieve you by receivin' ill beliefs and debriefs from fellow peoples
tellin and yet yellin at me screamin shoutin for me to leave you be
"Ruckis you need to leave him!"
Your mom screamin "Not my baby, please!"
So I'll disperse I'mma leave you at the end of this verse
hol' on Acid-imma e-mail you this "just for Loser-hearse

Horrible right?


:shock:

[Madd Skillz]

Yo, Ruckis Imma give this jargon crap a try....every one sit back a let the words caotivate you...hopefully.....

...Let me start this
and spark this, like an arsonist
my words, would have on hold like a receptionist
I'm compared to like Micheal
n!99as can't hang with this
If you wanna come test this sh!t
you better follow the ten commandments from the book of Exodus
to be touched, you better start caresin' this
I created th world
forget the beginning of Genesis
Some say Skillz is the wickedest
messin with me you get exposed to the mental viscousness

....!!$#^%#?....@&%#^>>>>>!*!#*&.....Skillz

Yo Ruckis holla @ mE.....ONE

[MADRUCKIS]

Hey bro-good one
I'll holla

I'm demograhically graphic
profane profanity
unfortunately I posed a problem because of my sanity
which I lost in kindergarden while at the winter garden
watchin cats I jumped on stage-arrested for grand larsen
I'm Carson Daily-Do you think Carson daily reads the news
and reads the head lines that calls him a fool
Macaroni
I'm the Mack-aren't I homey
I live life lonely only for more phonies to roll up on me
I dun did the do
I run slip ya fool
I push and mush cusions in your four door ignitions
distribution sales
by high exotic males named Chad, Brad, and Vlad
don't mind him-he impales
he is pale like blue butter
but does your butt bunt better
better buddy because bentleys bust bellies
enough b's
I'm gone g
somebody better stop me-my minds gone and left me
or better right me-you'd better write me
I'm slightly righty, but mightier with the left that left me
I'm up drinkin Downey, though downed in my uppies
I'm done Peg! Al Bundy
damn why is this night so sunny

sonny

sun ee



:ghost:

[MADRUCKIS]

good gracious

I think I over did it!:laugh:

[Madd Skillz]

You damn right.......

[MADRUCKIS]

Hey Skillz
You gon' keep postin stuff here or you gon' focus your attention to spitbox. You just got a challenge over there so I dunno what u feel like doin'.

Imma keep writing here. It lets me vent:frust: :roll:

[Madd Skillz]

imma do the same...gotta brush up on my stuff ......

[MADRUCKIS]

Alright heres a new one then

Man when is it ever not the case
that I feel displaced erased, in place of May
though its July, I replace the time in a blink of an eye
And retrace the steps that I have set in the space of a day
Have I
Lost you along the way? I will not lie, its hard to place ones marker on your way to the sky
And I'm
not talking about dying, I'm saying when you lie
down without a sound your mind will place your soul in a different plane
Or planes, which reach heights and fight just to stay above another planes head lights,
don't you head to the lights, all right?
You sigh when I spy your face-its in engraved with a grave gray matter
Like "Why matter?", but its sadder to shy away from a place that you let your head lie
Thats right-I'm saying
that I'm-not playing
This is it-the chase for the human race is on, no contemplating
I'm not fired up-I'm cooled down engraved in a heavy enclave
I save cause I'm safe inside
Only Beauty has no eyes, I mean "beauty" has no "i's"
spelled for you to face that it's in another guys eyes that your beauty lies
These words are englazed in preface and bolded
placed in my minds eye laced together in the bad weather of my crazed mind
dried out by the space between you and I