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BlackHeartedKing
Jun 13th, 2002, 07:01 AM
I wrote a poem. Don't like it if you don't want to:

I don't see how you could possibly ask
If the love we have is true
If only you could realize
My only thoughts are of you
You're always on my mind
You're always in my heart
I only hope and pray
That we may never part
The love I feel for you
Is truly one of a kind
And I hope it may last forever
Because more like it I'll never find
Each time we are together
Even more am I reassured
That soon all your doubts
Might finally be cured
I know what comes with being so close
With all the emotions, there is clutter
But trust me when I tell you
The love we have is like no other

Indrid Cold
Jun 13th, 2002, 09:35 PM
Nice poem!!!

Lost_myth
Jun 16th, 2002, 10:16 PM
That was good..you showed emotion...somewhat of a rhyming scheme, but not everything has to rhyme...Cool, dude!

Ruby Moon
Jun 21st, 2002, 02:47 PM
Nice poem! You should post other ones!

The Rhythmosaur
Jul 8th, 2002, 12:06 PM
Hope, you didnĀ“t have to suffer the feeling of nonrealized love... Good job (Okay: metric sceme...)