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Faile
Jan 23rd, 2002, 05:45 PM
self respect exists within principle only
so down and down and down we'll fall
again and again and again
and its not you its me again
depressed and left alone again

so one day we can die together
hold us still in time aghast
we'll deny them all
for the first time i'm alone

and self absorbed and broken up
and ruined and cursed and killed
and caught and perhaps
i needed you more than you needed me

and

i've heard all you can ever tell me
Pu the Owl
Jan 23rd, 2002, 05:52 PM
That's amazing! As usual!
Very deep and sad, but wonderful!
FreakOut
Jan 23rd, 2002, 06:11 PM
*wipes away tears*

I have something in my eyes, just a coincerdence thats all. :rolleyes:

Oh, nice poem.
jenova_jeb
Jan 23rd, 2002, 06:15 PM
Great poem Faile :) .
kamari-ice
Jan 23rd, 2002, 07:47 PM
Yes, a wonderful poem.
MakgSnake
Jan 23rd, 2002, 07:49 PM
Thats A Pretty Neat Poem There .... ! Very Good! ;)
Soul Angel
Jan 23rd, 2002, 07:58 PM
Great Poem Faile :)
Hylas
Jan 24th, 2002, 06:26 AM
That's a wonderful poem Faile!
I'd like to be able to write something like this, but my head is empty :(
007_JamesBond
Jan 24th, 2002, 12:32 PM
That was nice, thank you for that enlightening piece of poetry, I liked it.
Reid
Jan 24th, 2002, 03:25 PM
Good work, Faile.
Faile
Jan 24th, 2002, 05:32 PM
thankyou for your kind comments-rah
007_JamesBond
Jan 24th, 2002, 08:50 PM
Do you have anymore poems, I would like to see them, I will have to post up some of mine.
Faile
Jan 25th, 2002, 04:11 PM
i have quite a few .

but i don't tend to post them, because i don't like them
MakgSnake
Jan 25th, 2002, 04:16 PM
Originally posted by Faile
i have quite a few .
but i don't tend to post them, because i don't like them

Thats What U Think Faile. I Am Sure We Will Like Them As Much As We Liked All Ure Other Poems! :)
Faile
Jan 25th, 2002, 06:07 PM
then you are too kind
Soul Angel
Jan 25th, 2002, 10:54 PM
But Faile your poems are really good!
You should post more up so we can all read them! :)
Pearl
Jan 26th, 2002, 08:33 AM
Oh Faile!
This is wonderful and moving poem!

You're so good at writing them!
Faile
Jan 27th, 2002, 08:37 AM
maybe i shall then . or maybe not . depending on how much i despise them .

i don't know . the occasional line i like .

(why is it so hard to explain to people why i have no confidence in what i do)

anyway thankyou all .


and welcome back to pearl who we all thought had vanished for a while.
007_JamesBond
Jan 27th, 2002, 11:16 AM
I am sure that yours are excellent, they are better that than mine, post more please.