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007_JamesBond
Jan 27th, 2002, 10:00 AM
I told you that I would here I go


As I plunged into the depths of the deep forgotten
I turn around to take a look at the life I was leaving behind
As I turn around I see nothing, no reason to stay, no hope
So I turn around and start to walk, a tear drops from my eye, I continue to walk. I never turned around again that day.
Then as I reach my final destination, I turn around to take a final look at the life of torment I was leaving, and I say you.
You say no, I say I must, why you say, it was you, you were never there when I needed you.
I then turn around and in the distance you scream no, as I take my final stemps into the deep forgotten



I hope that you like it.

Soul Angel
Jan 27th, 2002, 10:43 AM
007_JamesBond that was excellent!!!
I really liked it and all, it was really well done! :)

I hope you'll be posting more of your work soon
I can't wait to read more of your work you've done! :D

Faile
Jan 27th, 2002, 11:02 AM
yey ! more poetry !

very good

007_JamesBond
Jan 27th, 2002, 11:14 AM
Do you really like it???????

Soul Angel
Jan 27th, 2002, 11:37 AM
Yes of course I really like it!
It is really well done ;)
You should put more of your poems up for us to all read! :D

007_JamesBond
Jan 27th, 2002, 12:04 PM
I guess I am going to have to put a couple more up now. Ill put another one up by this week K

Soul Angel
Jan 27th, 2002, 12:08 PM
Yay!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Can't wait to read it 007_JamesBond ;) :D

007_JamesBond
Jan 27th, 2002, 12:13 PM
Your too kind.

Cannibal Clown
Jan 27th, 2002, 12:45 PM
Wow, great job. I had no idea that you had a talent in writing.

007_JamesBond
Jan 27th, 2002, 12:49 PM
There are alot of things that people do not know about me. My story that I am writting is on 7.5 pages long and still going.

Soul Angel
Jan 27th, 2002, 01:38 PM
Say 007_JamesBond will you be posting your story on here?
I would like to read it!

Cannibal Clown
Jan 27th, 2002, 02:28 PM
Originally posted by 007_JamesBond
There are alot of things that people do not know about me. My story that I am writting is on 7.5 pages long and still going.

I am also currently working on a story. It's 27 pages long right now and I'm still in character development.

And No, 007. It's not the Fidel Castro and Kinky one.

007_JamesBond
Jan 27th, 2002, 04:59 PM
I do not know if I will put up my story, in my story there is no real character development, it sort of keeps you guessing

Rei
Jan 27th, 2002, 05:16 PM
Very good poem 007 James Bond! I really liked it!
It's brief but good and nicely written!

007_JamesBond
Jan 27th, 2002, 05:28 PM
Thanks alot Rei.

MakgSnake
Jan 27th, 2002, 05:47 PM
Thats A Good Poetry!.! Should Be Named "Whenever I Turned Around".

Nice Work Double "O" 7!

007_JamesBond
Jan 28th, 2002, 12:15 PM
I think that I will name it that. good tittle