The Fantasy I {Revised}

[kamari-ice]

As you know the other thread wasn't making too many great comments.Actually only one great comment, so I will Revise it like Stephen King does.Just read it, if you don't like it, well just look at the screens at the bottom here.

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The Fantasy I

The Hymn Of The Fayth starts, the calm has come from defeating the undefetable Sin.

Jecht has become Sin, the Final Aeoner.Zxu doesn't understand why Jecht went away, he thinks he died in Montana somewhere.

Okay cut short again, sorry!!!!!!

[happy_doughnut]

Keep on going Kimari. From the looks of it, you have great potential. I just know your story is going to turn out awesome! Besides, it has a FF twist so you can't possibly go wrong. I'm really looking forward to reading the whole thing.

[Hylas]

Sorry, but I don't get the point of this thread, as I don't get the point of the other thread. This is supposed to replace the other one, but still I don't get it...

[kamari-ice]

Hylas are you just posting that crazy stuff just to get a higher number of threads posted.If you didn't Read below:

This is a great story I thought of.
B) this is a better story than the other
C) if you don't get it don't read it

Okay, I will post another tf revised so this one cAN be for questions.
Sheesh!

[Hylas]

Sorry, but your answer pissed me kamari. I'm not trying to rise my posts number, if you want to know. I just asked because this is fan fiction forum and you didn't post a thread with a story, but a thread with a list of images and few words.
I still think this is kinda pointless, in case you want my opinion. You opened another thread like this and then another one and a third one. You're spamming, not me :evil:

[kamari-ice]

Hey its because ya'll stupid questions, I can't right a story with stupid questions on it.Ehhh, I am not spamming, ya'll the ones, if ya'll are giving me a huge essay for me to read, be pointless, can't I post around here without stupid questions.This is the area for questions, ask me something good not crazy.The one with my story is The Fantasy I>The Other Side.Now I am NOT spamming.There. :nerv: :boom: :evil:

[Pu the Owl]

Kamari, I have to agree with Hylas: there's no need for this thread, since you started it only because you posted another one and others criticized :sarcasm:
And there's no need to offend others, right?

And another thing I've read in the last thread: questions must be posted where you're posting the story, not here. This is Fan Fiction Forum, not kamari-ice forum...