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May 13th, 2004, 09:11 AM | #1 |
Now Im Nothing
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Location: Rochester, NY
Age: 39
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Mike Merica
this is a lil poem that eli mentioned in my other thread i just posted... mikey merica is my best friend of 7 years... and he moved to South Carolina... and well i was a tad hurt cause i lost my best friend... but was remembering the good times ... and now.. the actual not so good poem i wrote about it
what can i say about mikey... we would have been together forever more than likely... but lifes plans are never the same as my own... lead me down another path thats still not shown... if the answers in life were always so clear... what would be the point of having my friend so near... gone away but close in my heart... if i cherish what we've had we will never be apart.
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May 13th, 2004, 02:34 PM | #2 |
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Aww you posted it in here..well i love it, like i told you when you wrotte it,and to think it only took about 2 minutes for you to writte it down..very nice Mr Cory .
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May 14th, 2004, 11:06 AM | #3 |
Every One Dies Alone
Joined: May 2002
Location: In the depths of existance where the hot magma flows.
Age: 37
Posts: 1,057
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That's really sweet boo-boo. I think that it was a nice poem. Good use of rhyme in your quatrains.
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All around me are familiar faces Worn out places Worn out faces Bright & early for the daily races Going nowhere Going nowhere Their tears R filling up their glasses No Xpression No Xpression Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows No 2morrow No 2morrow & I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad. These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had |
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