Sir Fratley's Song

Pu the Owl · Oct 2nd, 2002, 06:31 PM

Like the very first time to the world I open my eyes
I was dead and then without a reason I was reborn
Now tasting the chill of the wind I claim my vice
But there's something lost floating in memories torn

I wander to catch petals and leaves and merry perfumes
Immersing my head in those watery days of Fate
I'll call the name I cannot forget from ancient tunes
And someday I'll be back to your unknown shade

Come, come find me at the bottom of this wishing well
Till dawn fades floating remembrance's left about
Show me the way out from a solitary obscured shell
Confusion got me and I saw my dark sun burning out

Following the course of eternal seasons existance ain't a waste
Stuck to a fragment of inner stability, not living in haste.

Note: this a little unuseful poem written two years ago. I'm not used to fan fictions writing, so this is probably the only "fan fiction" I've ever written. It's not particularly good, maybe because my knowledge of English is quite poor for these purposes. I don't know. I'm not satisfied with it, but I found it in my hard disk and I thought to post it anyway. For those who don't know, Sir Fratley is secondary character from Final Fantasy 9.

Ruby Moon · Oct 4th, 2002, 06:30 PM

Your English is "poor"? Don't make me laugh

Daedaelus · Oct 4th, 2002, 07:27 PM

lol Fortune, what are you talking about? You speak English very well.

Lost_myth · Oct 4th, 2002, 07:39 PM

Fortune, I'm blessing you with good english for the rest of your life. That explains why I'm getting worse. Gwah hahah...

Tight, I read it on thursday at school.

Ruby Moon · Oct 4th, 2002, 07:54 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Blue3vilx
Fortune, I'm blessing you with good english for the rest of your life. That explains why I'm getting worse. Gwah hahah...

Are you getting worse? Every writer in this forum must be mad or something, because I don't see it either

Faile · Oct 5th, 2002, 02:48 PM

eeeeeeeeeeeee ! a fortune-writing !

a rarity to see one posted, but amazing always they are. you so should post more.

yes !

and your english is better than mine.

Pu the Owl · Oct 7th, 2002, 01:01 PM

WOW! Thank you so much for the comments!

Indeed...it's a rarity to see stuff from me posted here! Probably you won't see other writings in the future

Faile · Nov 24th, 2002, 07:39 PM

but we must !

Black Heart · Nov 24th, 2002, 11:22 PM

Why won't you post more?

Redpyramidhead · Nov 26th, 2002, 01:10 AM

I would have to say I was quite drawn into this poem and hung on to every single word. I think your English flows beautifully from word to word and speaks the story you tell in this poem masterfully. This character's story is already pulling on my heart strings! I'm very inspired to buy FF9 now. It's quite evident from your writing what an experience the storyline must be. I think this song should be in the game!

_RED_ stuff

Oct 2nd, 2002, 06:31 PM	#1
Pu the Owl Useless Oracle™ Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Everywhere Posts: 5,136	Sir Fratley's Song Like the very first time to the world I open my eyes I was dead and then without a reason I was reborn Now tasting the chill of the wind I claim my vice But there's something lost floating in memories torn I wander to catch petals and leaves and merry perfumes Immersing my head in those watery days of Fate I'll call the name I cannot forget from ancient tunes And someday I'll be back to your unknown shade Come, come find me at the bottom of this wishing well Till dawn fades floating remembrance's left about Show me the way out from a solitary obscured shell Confusion got me and I saw my dark sun burning out Following the course of eternal seasons existance ain't a waste Stuck to a fragment of inner stability, not living in haste. Note: this a little unuseful poem written two years ago. I'm not used to fan fictions writing, so this is probably the only "fan fiction" I've ever written. It's not particularly good, maybe because my knowledge of English is quite poor for these purposes. I don't know. I'm not satisfied with it, but I found it in my hard disk and I thought to post it anyway. For those who don't know, Sir Fratley is secondary character from Final Fantasy 9.

Oct 4th, 2002, 06:30 PM	#2
Ruby Moon The Cynical Clone Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Lakeview Hotel Posts: 496	Your English is "poor"? Don't make me laugh __________________

Oct 4th, 2002, 07:39 PM	#4
Lost_myth Every One Dies Alone Joined: May 2002 Location: In the depths of existance where the hot magma flows. Age: 37 Posts: 1,057	Fortune, I'm blessing you with good english for the rest of your life. That explains why I'm getting worse. Gwah hahah... Tight, I read it on thursday at school. __________________ All around me are familiar faces Worn out places Worn out faces Bright & early for the daily races Going nowhere Going nowhere Their tears R filling up their glasses No Xpression No Xpression Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows No 2morrow No 2morrow & I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad. These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had

Oct 5th, 2002, 02:48 PM	#6
Faile ys. Joined: Jan 2002 Location: ex-ex-exeter, disunited kingdom Age: 40 Posts: 1,137	eeeeeeeeeeeee ! a fortune-writing ! a rarity to see one posted, but amazing always they are. you so should post more. yes ! and your english is better than mine. __________________ www.catherineandtheowl.com purr. miaow. hiss.

Nov 24th, 2002, 07:39 PM	#8
Faile ys. Joined: Jan 2002 Location: ex-ex-exeter, disunited kingdom Age: 40 Posts: 1,137	but we must ! __________________ www.catherineandtheowl.com purr. miaow. hiss.

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Oct 4th, 2002, 07:27 PM	#3
Daedaelus I'm Rick James ***** Joined: Sep 2002 Location: Outset Island Age: 43 Posts: 725	lol Fortune, what are you talking about? You speak English very well.

Oct 7th, 2002, 01:01 PM	#7
Pu the Owl Useless Oracle™ Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Everywhere Posts: 5,136	WOW! Thank you so much for the comments! Indeed...it's a rarity to see stuff from me posted here! Probably you won't see other writings in the future

Nov 24th, 2002, 11:22 PM	#9
Black Heart Mighty Captain Joined: Mar 2002 Location: Nautilus Posts: 273	Why won't you post more?

Nov 26th, 2002, 01:10 AM	#10
Redpyramidhead pazparacolombia Joined: Sep 2002 Location: Restless dreams... Age: 43 Posts: 2,002	I would have to say I was quite drawn into this poem and hung on to every single word. I think your English flows beautifully from word to word and speaks the story you tell in this poem masterfully. This character's story is already pulling on my heart strings! I'm very inspired to buy FF9 now. It's quite evident from your writing what an experience the storyline must be. I think this song should be in the game! _RED_ stuff __________________ "..loathsome laughing, mixed with such a cry as no man has heard save for in the phlegathon of unrelatable nightmares; a cry wherein reverberated the horror and anguish of a haunted lifetime packed into one atrocious moment..."

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