The Sword 4 Hire

Sword 4 Hire · Sep 26th, 2002, 03:32 PM

The Sword 4 Hire

The light trembles on his skin

While the shadow's greet him eagerly

Rays reflected from the drawn blade

It's edge as thin as thread

Yet as deadly as the flames

The flames that burn within him

Concealed by the chain-linked armor

Armor impenetrible to your thoughts

Your wielded threats are reflected

Never touching him

Never confronting him

Never again will you see him

For you are down

Gasping for the air that he left you

Dim lights

Dim hope

Dim existence...

...

Contract Fullfilled...

Lost_myth · Sep 27th, 2002, 11:26 AM

Nice... that was cool. I liked how you describe the whole thing about the blade.

Hylas · Sep 28th, 2002, 10:02 AM

Very cool and well written!

Darkness 4 Hire · Oct 13th, 2002, 11:47 PM

Awesome poem S4H, couldnt have done any better myself!!!

peace bro!

Redpyramidhead · Oct 21st, 2002, 12:38 AM

I liked this poem. I like how you convey the sword as an extention of the fire within him and vice versa. And then there's the impenetrable armor, both in a physical sense as well as an emotional sense, cuz this is definately a guy who is dedicated to his work and knows the difference between these things. So, basically you describe things really well for your audience to get all that. keep 'em coming!

_RED_ stuff

Sword 4 Hire · Oct 21st, 2002, 03:23 PM

Thank you

Sep 26th, 2002, 03:32 PM	#1
Sword 4 Hire Retired... Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Swamp hill. Age: 37 Posts: 1,632	The Sword 4 Hire The Sword 4 Hire The light trembles on his skin While the shadow's greet him eagerly Rays reflected from the drawn blade It's edge as thin as thread Yet as deadly as the flames The flames that burn within him Concealed by the chain-linked armor Armor impenetrible to your thoughts Your wielded threats are reflected Never touching him Never confronting him Never again will you see him For you are down Gasping for the air that he left you Dim lights Dim hope Dim existence... ... Contract Fullfilled... __________________ and for now the tired soldier sheathes his sword...

Sep 27th, 2002, 11:26 AM	#2
Lost_myth Every One Dies Alone Joined: May 2002 Location: In the depths of existance where the hot magma flows. Age: 37 Posts: 1,057	Nice... that was cool. I liked how you describe the whole thing about the blade. __________________ All around me are familiar faces Worn out places Worn out faces Bright & early for the daily races Going nowhere Going nowhere Their tears R filling up their glasses No Xpression No Xpression Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows No 2morrow No 2morrow & I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad. These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had

Oct 13th, 2002, 11:47 PM	#4
Darkness 4 Hire Hero of Darkness Joined: Sep 2002 Location: In between the depths of Time Age: 40 Posts: 122	Awesome poem S4H, couldnt have done any better myself!!! peace bro! __________________

Oct 21st, 2002, 12:38 AM	#5
Redpyramidhead pazparacolombia Joined: Sep 2002 Location: Restless dreams... Age: 43 Posts: 2,002	I liked this poem. I like how you convey the sword as an extention of the fire within him and vice versa. And then there's the impenetrable armor, both in a physical sense as well as an emotional sense, cuz this is definately a guy who is dedicated to his work and knows the difference between these things. So, basically you describe things really well for your audience to get all that. keep 'em coming! _RED_ stuff __________________ "..loathsome laughing, mixed with such a cry as no man has heard save for in the phlegathon of unrelatable nightmares; a cry wherein reverberated the horror and anguish of a haunted lifetime packed into one atrocious moment..."

Oct 21st, 2002, 03:23 PM	#6
Sword 4 Hire Retired... Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Swamp hill. Age: 37 Posts: 1,632	Thank you __________________ and for now the tired soldier sheathes his sword...

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Sep 28th, 2002, 10:02 AM	#3
Hylas Now or Never Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Zürich Age: 42 Posts: 2,456	Very cool and well written!

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