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[MADRUCKIS]

Yawnnn
yeah yeah, I know
Its been awhile since I started up in Fan fic, sorry been busy. I decided just to start a thread which I think people should try. I'll write in free verse what ever I feel at the time that I'm logged on. It's pretty good practice for a free style, which I don't do anymore-but my little brothers gotten into and makes me proud when he gets into poetry. well ummm lets see

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Sittin here, thinkin about the route I took be here
see here
I be there, hear the slight buzz of mostly mosquitos
ponderin about a bag of Cheetos-man I need those
crap! empty bag pass me those Doritos
Peepin the front line of this news
Nets net nothing but a new neighborhood knots
next stop
the nba finals
full of funnies garfeild and lionell
I'm gettin hazy, I'm lazy-my minds displaced me
erased the
amazin fact that its four
in the mourn
and I'm up but I'm out and I'm yawin'
man its freezin-close the window this ain't a barn in
an Orange Farm from folks forged from chosen armies
disarm me! please, my fingers blistering
while you readin this your really listening to me fallin alseep so I'll see yall next week

[happy_doughnut]

Originally posted by MADRUCKIS
ponderin about a bag of Cheetos-man I need those
crap! empty bag pass me those Doritos

Haha! That was my favorite part! Hey, that's good. I thought it was very funny! You should post more fan fics more often. I like this one

[MADRUCKIS]

Thanx Mena:
Was kinda bored that night so I started buggin out like that. I'm at work bored so I guess no time better tahn the present:

umm

I'm stuck
my seat is like a bucket of green muck
that my little brother distributes on and over all of my stuff
yellin and screamin
I'm believing he's a demon
forced of course
leavin out all of his Dragon Ball Z men
I'm trippin fallin
disgraced
I'm fallin on my face-tellin him
umm yellin that his socks by me are smellin displaced
please place them in a place where God can give 'em grace
and put the socks out of their misery
screw washing-they must be erased
I'm done
I'm tired
Yo boy your fired
Fired from being my brother-tell my mother to send the next hired
I'm done going full throttle-bottled up all inside of
me
gee it kinda sucks to be this boys role model

[MADRUCKIS]

Well
I'm gonna move this thread cause it doesn't seem to match the fan fiction. No one cares anyway cuase nobody but mena replied so cya. I'll put it in general chat!!!!