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Old Jan 24th, 2004, 11:39 PM   #1
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Question Stuff by Me.

ok this is the first time I have ever done anything like this. normally I keep my stuff to myself.. no-one has ever seen stuff I've written, not even family so Im pretty nervous putting this up here...

ok here goes.. this is just soemthing that flowed out of my brain when I was sitting here.. its kinda how I feel lately.

Its late now but my mind still ticks,
kept here, im stuck, no chance to escape
I want to sleep, to rest, to dream.
Let go of worries, thoughts and pain,
To live a new life of hope and joy
but still im here awake, still void

I feel the weight upon my eyelids
but my eyes cease to close
The heavyness in my head closing in
I wait for morning to come
to break this spell
to shake me into life
but day comes and goes
and I am back here again.

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Old Jan 27th, 2004, 12:42 AM   #2
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Very well done!! It does take a lot to share your writing.. i had a ton of stuff written and out of fear of people finding it i used to burn it.... But now i just dont care anymore and i share it with anyone who will read it... Very nice again
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Old Jan 27th, 2004, 07:14 AM   #3
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That's a pretty cool poem Piggle...and you should be afraid to show your feelings and emotions...
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Old Jan 27th, 2004, 12:00 PM   #4
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Ditto piggle, were all family here . Nice poem
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Old Jan 28th, 2004, 05:15 AM   #5
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Talking

Thanks ppl! Im really pleased with it aswell. Amazing what happens when you dont sleep. It really sums how I've been feeling lately.

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and you should be afraid to show your feelings and emotions.
Im guessin you meant to put Shouldn't eli but I got what you meant. Thanks!

Thanks again guys and gals for your Encouraging words.

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Old Jan 28th, 2004, 08:56 AM   #6
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yes that's what i meant to say...
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Old Jan 30th, 2004, 06:24 PM   #7
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Very deep and thoughtful Piggle... well done.
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Old Feb 7th, 2004, 01:09 AM   #8
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Your style is presented in such a convincing manner that one can read this and immediately realize it is a completed piece, or atleast seems that way. No important elements from the author's eyes are noticeably missing to others is what I mean. For a first time sharing something, it is extremely impressive to see something that flows this well and that has this type of impact on its readers. Well, I speak for myself, but I'm sure many other's will agree.

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Old Feb 7th, 2004, 04:09 PM   #9
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Piggle nice work Have you ever though of putting it up on poetry.com ? they automatically copyright it for you when you post it there free of charge and it may get published in a book... thats what Deathwatchz and Fantasytiger do with all of there poems
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Old Feb 8th, 2004, 09:33 AM   #10
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No I Haven't Yuna but I may do now, I wasn't sure if it was good enough but everyones comments has given me confidence.

Thanks again to everyone for their kind words it really means alot to me.

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Old Feb 8th, 2004, 04:27 PM   #11
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I don't know why you were so intimidated by showing your writing to others. It's pretty damn good. You should share it more often with others. I'm sure you have many more that people would really enjoy reading.
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Old Feb 9th, 2004, 10:34 PM   #12
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Thanks CC, I may put some other stuff on here at some point, although I've never put anything down on paper b4 so I dont have anything stored away at the moment.

Thanks again for everyones kind and supportive words.

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Old Feb 11th, 2004, 01:22 AM   #13
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Arrow New Stuff...

Just a short one...

Daybreak, The light fills in
I stir, memories of dreams start to fade
as reality comes into place
Worries fill my brain
As I start my routine
A smile appears on my face
Yet my eyes stay the same
Empty, distant, no sparkle
Outside a facade, Inside the pain.

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Old Feb 11th, 2004, 01:52 AM   #14
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I like it. It's an interesting description of what it might feel like for you to wake up and have the transition of emotions from dreams to reality hit you and how you might interpret it. I can get a sense of it here. Written well.

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I'm not a poetry fan but I know what I like, and this I like. Writing poetry is very difficult even if it seems like it isn't. I can understand your hesitation to submit your work in fear of rejection and ridicule, but you did the right thing here. Well done Piggle.

This is good work and I look forward to reading more of it, should you decide to post it. Good luck!
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Really nice litle poem Piggle...keep up the good work...
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Yeah ! You don't need to be intimidated when posting here. Anything unkind said gets punished with ... punishment I guess.

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Wow thanks people for all your support.
It means alot.

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Thanks so much for that comment.

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Wow.. the second one is really well done as well... i like them... they are short yet really insightfull into yourself... you must do some good introspective thinking when you do these...
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