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Feb 19th, 2002, 07:39 AM | #1 |
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Even perfection must ultimately lead to desire
It's something rather more serious than my previous scrawlings have been, but here we are anyway.
Pulled from a year ago this week i wrote 6am, and its written from the perspective of someone who is throwing themselves into losing weight in the hope of finding what they feel they lack in life . i want to be free from all the world freedom comes when i fit in a size smaller than before then i shall be liked and i shall be free but free of nothing because i'm always too far forward too backward at a smile too lost within my dreams of looking good and being liked self control is the key the key to beauty so i'll starve myself and let the world see me so i'll destroy myself come let the world believe me that freedom comes at 6am when i'm sick again for nothing and everything aside self denial is the key so this is beauty and i'll sit and cry at night touch the skin of idols pictures on the wall come to me not free me then i'll cry again alone in my world of self control and belief that this will see me through make me popular at school now i sleep at night my breath is as a sigh no energy at all to crawl to my window and see the world that cursed us all but i'm free at last of the life that shackled me
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Feb 20th, 2002, 09:10 AM | #2 |
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[COLOR=sky blue]I like that. It is a lot better than any of my poems. Nice Job Faile.[/COLOR]
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Feb 20th, 2002, 11:13 AM | #3 |
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That was good Faile, I like it!
It was a bit of a sad poem but it is probably so true for some people But its still very good, keep it up
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Feb 22nd, 2002, 09:36 PM | #4 |
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Sad poems are always true, or at least they are true most of the time, because the're sincere .
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Feb 23rd, 2002, 01:07 PM | #5 |
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I think the poem was very good and deep as well.
It's sad to know that there are a lot of people like that in reality and that that is how they think all of the time. I used to know a few people like that.
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Feb 24th, 2002, 06:05 PM | #6 |
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thankyou for your comments
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Feb 24th, 2002, 08:23 PM | #7 |
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Nice poem i like it.Its very discriptive and deep
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