New Poem

Female_Vivi · May 14th, 2002, 09:18 AM

May 10th 2002
Title: You

It was the day you finaly came
you offerd me an apologie and shame

I didn't care anymore, I had forgotten you
but no, you had to say more

It was not your fault, blame me you said
I thought, it's a little late for that!

All was said and you told me, I have to go
You left me with pain behind and you didin't even know

I'll admit, back then, we shure had fun
now it's over, said and done

Maybe a other time and place
then I will give you my hearth and a embrace

-x-

IcyMourdor · May 14th, 2002, 10:15 AM

Nice job on the poem. I'm not into poetry much because i prefer novel type things(maybe I should start working on mine again), but it was still pretty good.

Pu the Owl · May 14th, 2002, 10:35 AM

I liked this new poem! I'm so envious of your ability in using rhymes! I cannot use them because in my poems they always sound dumb hehehe

Faile · May 14th, 2002, 04:44 PM

nice poem

Mana · May 14th, 2002, 09:27 PM

Another good poem from Female_Vivi!

Female_Vivi · May 15th, 2002, 11:20 AM

Haha, thanx

Rei · May 16th, 2002, 11:48 AM

Very nice Vivi, you write very enjoyable poems

May 14th, 2002, 09:18 AM	#1
Female_Vivi Pointy Hats Girl Joined: May 2002 Location: The Netherlands Age: 38 Posts: 72	New Poem May 10th 2002 Title: You It was the day you finaly came you offerd me an apologie and shame I didn't care anymore, I had forgotten you but no, you had to say more It was not your fault, blame me you said I thought, it's a little late for that! All was said and you told me, I have to go You left me with pain behind and you didin't even know I'll admit, back then, we shure had fun now it's over, said and done Maybe a other time and place then I will give you my hearth and a embrace -x-

May 14th, 2002, 10:15 AM	#2
IcyMourdor Cream Puff Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Stevens Point, Wisconsin Age: 38 Posts: 2,713	Nice job on the poem. I'm not into poetry much because i prefer novel type things(maybe I should start working on mine again), but it was still pretty good. __________________ You will walk in fire, earth, water, and air, through temptation, and at last into despair and desolation.

May 14th, 2002, 04:44 PM	#4
Faile ys. Joined: Jan 2002 Location: ex-ex-exeter, disunited kingdom Age: 40 Posts: 1,137	nice poem __________________ www.catherineandtheowl.com purr. miaow. hiss.

May 14th, 2002, 09:27 PM	#5
Mana Girlfriend of Steel Joined: Feb 2002 Location: Secret! Posts: 195	Another good poem from Female_Vivi! __________________ Thanks Fortune for the banner ^__^

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May 14th, 2002, 10:35 AM	#3
Pu the Owl Useless Oracle™ Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Everywhere Posts: 5,136	I liked this new poem! I'm so envious of your ability in using rhymes! I cannot use them because in my poems they always sound dumb hehehe

May 15th, 2002, 11:20 AM	#6
Female_Vivi Pointy Hats Girl Joined: May 2002 Location: The Netherlands Age: 38 Posts: 72	Haha, thanx

May 16th, 2002, 11:48 AM	#7
Rei EVA 00 Pilot Joined: Jan 2002 Location: NERV Age: 41 Posts: 2,239	Very nice Vivi, you write very enjoyable poems


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