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Nov 25th, 2002, 01:51 AM
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charmed fan poem 2
******firefly poem*****************
********************************** phoebe bb was out in the garden late at night trying to catch fireflys soon she caught four and shove them up her nose and made her eyes glow hyper piper got really hyper paige stage said we need a doctor for those two geeks leo weo said yep paige stage we need a doctor for those two billys and cole bole said yep paige stage we need a doctor for those two bows then hyper piper caught fireflys and shove them up her nose and mad her eyes glow then paige stage caught fireflys and shove them up her nose and made her eyes glow then leo weo caught fireflys and shove them up his nose and made his eyes glow then cole bole caught fireflys and shove them up his nose and made his eyes glow it wasn't dark anymore and soon it was light.a few days later they had a firefly party and had a great time by riley e harris |
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Nov 25th, 2002, 04:04 AM
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please learn the use of punctuation.
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Nov 25th, 2002, 11:41 AM
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This poem is one of the weirdest I've read here!
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Nov 25th, 2002, 01:48 PM
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i'm sorry but there is no evidence of this being a stream of conciousness thought.
If it was correctly spelt and punctuated to the extent that stream of conciousness poetry normally is then it would be acceptable. But really, it's not like I'm asking the earth, just the correct spelling of fireflies and the like. xx |
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Nov 25th, 2002, 02:46 PM
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I wasn't saying it was real stream of consciousness, I was only kidding, but sorry, I won't do it again
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Nov 25th, 2002, 03:14 PM
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that is a funny poem! hahah.....love it.
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Nov 25th, 2002, 04:12 PM
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eek !
i didn't mean to sound mean *hides* eek ! eek ! |
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Nov 26th, 2002, 12:40 AM
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Don't hide! We were just expressing different opinions. To me, the punctuation doesn't seem all that important compared to the feel of the poem or stream of consciousness or whatever it is. I like it...it was a nice little mind trip. Seemed simple in its fantasyness and like some kind of escape from complicated realities. keep em coming kittens&cats.
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Nov 26th, 2002, 02:37 AM
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please read
ok guys for those who read my little niece poem in fanfiction
well there a tv show call charmed it about three sisters that are witches and they fight against evil.the stars of charmed are ******************** Aylssa milano as phoebe tunner rose mcgowan as paige holly marie combs as piper wytta brian krause as leo wytta julian mchon as cole tunner before sheleft the shannen dorthey as prue. sorry if i miss spell shannen last name |
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Nov 26th, 2002, 04:44 AM
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well, i certainly feel enlightened.
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Nov 26th, 2002, 07:30 AM
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absolutely marvelous......two thumbs up....confuse me some more.
intrigue me.
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Nov 26th, 2002, 10:18 AM
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its all strangely alice in wonderland esque.
and i've just woken up from a nap. where am i ? whats going on ? zzzzzz |
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Nov 26th, 2002, 03:17 PM
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 ahh yes, that one definetly hits the spot...must be a pretty good fan if you write poems about the show!I'm tired as well and reading that stuff just makes my mind work too hard...  but overall....uh.....very interesting... Post some more!!! here's my haiku: a poem that is about Charmed relentless chaos the words are confusing me  oh my god, that is bad....
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