Deap Short Fast Poem -I made it

AudioBoxer · Aug 9th, 2002, 01:12 AM

In the Darkness we shall pass,
we came together all at last,
as we thought to our past,
our days would never last,
so we passed,
to the end we could tell,
we were gone with heaven no hell

Lost_myth · Aug 9th, 2002, 01:17 PM

Yo. That's tight. I like that... alot. I'm still thinking about it.

AudioBoxer · Aug 9th, 2002, 04:49 PM

I was thinking about people with relationships and abousive ones, where the husbands hit the wive and so on.....

Lost_myth · Aug 9th, 2002, 05:48 PM

I can imagine them saying that as they protested or something. Good job.

AudioBoxer · Aug 10th, 2002, 11:15 AM

thanx I think thats the best poem I have ever done, I mean like just thought of it all fast and typed it up

Aug 9th, 2002, 01:12 AM	#1
AudioBoxer Banned Member Joined: Jul 2002 Location: Some white padded room? Posts: 899	Deap Short Fast Poem -I made it In the Darkness we shall pass, we came together all at last, as we thought to our past, our days would never last, so we passed, to the end we could tell, we were gone with heaven no hell

Aug 9th, 2002, 01:17 PM	#2
Lost_myth Every One Dies Alone Joined: May 2002 Location: In the depths of existance where the hot magma flows. Age: 37 Posts: 1,057	Yo. That's tight. I like that... alot. I'm still thinking about it. __________________ All around me are familiar faces Worn out places Worn out faces Bright & early for the daily races Going nowhere Going nowhere Their tears R filling up their glasses No Xpression No Xpression Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows No 2morrow No 2morrow & I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad. These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had

Aug 9th, 2002, 05:48 PM	#4
Lost_myth Every One Dies Alone Joined: May 2002 Location: In the depths of existance where the hot magma flows. Age: 37 Posts: 1,057	I can imagine them saying that as they protested or something. Good job. __________________ All around me are familiar faces Worn out places Worn out faces Bright & early for the daily races Going nowhere Going nowhere Their tears R filling up their glasses No Xpression No Xpression Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows No 2morrow No 2morrow & I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad. These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had

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Deap Short Fast Poem -I made it

Aug 9th, 2002, 04:49 PM	#3
AudioBoxer Banned Member Joined: Jul 2002 Location: Some white padded room? Posts: 899	I was thinking about people with relationships and abousive ones, where the husbands hit the wive and so on.....

Aug 10th, 2002, 11:15 AM	#5
AudioBoxer Banned Member Joined: Jul 2002 Location: Some white padded room? Posts: 899	thanx I think thats the best poem I have ever done, I mean like just thought of it all fast and typed it up


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