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Old Oct 6th, 2002, 01:27 AM   #1
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Ink

My faithful pen lays still
After years of abuse it lays still
Still as your mind
Still as your imagination
Still as your heart
And yet for some reason today
It leaks
Everywhere it leaks and stains
Stains your rough exteriors
Your fortress contains my mess
Your tattooed
Branded

And yet you wash away the ink
You simply forget about the ordeal
No big deal eh?
That was my pen that flood upon you
This room is a mess now
Your clothes are a mess
This whole situation is covered thanks to my pen
But you don't care
You wipe my stain clean
No more stain
No more memories
No more....
Ink
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Old Oct 6th, 2002, 02:35 PM   #2
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Damn that was really good, It had the Poetic touch that Robert Frost put in his. That was really good! Keep it up.
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Old Oct 6th, 2002, 05:11 PM   #3
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Wow thank you, although I'm no where close to Frost

Thanks again though, I appreciate it!
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Old Oct 6th, 2002, 05:22 PM   #4
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mog

It was profoundly deep. I absolutly adore it. I'm not trying to be nice or anything, but your poem is now one of my favorites.

Beautiful.
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All around me are familiar faces
Worn out places Worn out faces
Bright & early for the daily races
Going nowhere Going nowhere
Their tears R filling up their glasses
No Xpression No Xpression
Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows

No 2morrow No 2morrow
& I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad.
These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had
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Old Oct 6th, 2002, 07:26 PM   #5
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I agree that this is probably one of the best things you posted here, really simple and beautiful.
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Old Oct 6th, 2002, 09:12 PM   #6
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Wow I'm gettin some really good praise for this...thank you all
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Old Oct 13th, 2002, 03:20 PM   #7
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What can i say S4H, can't beileve it almost took us a year to become friends when we are so much alike and we live right next to each other lol...glad we became friends you always got me if you ever need anything...farewell!
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