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Old Jul 16th, 2002, 05:39 PM   #1
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The Ninja...a poem by yours trully

The Ninja

by: DJ Sword Master Flash

What will you do when the Ninja comes?
Comes knocking on your door
Breaking your sense of solitude
Till the silence is no more

Will you let it in and befriend it
Leaving caution to the wind
Or will you lock it out in the cold
And never let it in

It will be your best friend
Making all your problems right
And you will trust it for the moment
Then let it finish you in the night

What will you do when your ninja comes?
Will you invite to take its coat?
And turn your back for a second’s worth
Until there’s a shuriken in your throat…
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Old Jul 16th, 2002, 05:49 PM   #2
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Angry

Wow, another amazing poem !
Man, I hafta say, I really like the way you write ! I'm glad you decided to write some more 'cuz it's really great !

I find the comparison to be so true. Well, at least it is to me.
Using a Ninja in it was quite clever.
*sniffle* Again, very well done .
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Old Jul 16th, 2002, 06:01 PM   #3
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An acrostic poem, KOOL!
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Old Jul 16th, 2002, 06:41 PM   #4
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awsome poem!!!
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Old Jul 17th, 2002, 12:11 AM   #5
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Indeed...
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All around me are familiar faces
Worn out places Worn out faces
Bright & early for the daily races
Going nowhere Going nowhere
Their tears R filling up their glasses
No Xpression No Xpression
Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows

No 2morrow No 2morrow
& I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad.
These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had
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Old Jul 17th, 2002, 03:39 PM   #6
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Bizarre choice for the subject, but nice work
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Old Jul 17th, 2002, 06:43 PM   #7
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You have to dig deeper into the poem...

...it's not really about a ninja....
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Old Jul 17th, 2002, 10:59 PM   #8
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Seems like a friend that has betrayed you. Don't trust strangers or something. Good meaning. Yes, you did do a good job. Indeed. I'm not saying it just say it either. I really mean it. My favorite is still OMG I wrote a poem tho.
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Going nowhere Going nowhere
Their tears R filling up their glasses
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No 2morrow No 2morrow
& I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad.
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Old Jul 18th, 2002, 03:50 AM   #9
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Saying bizarre choice for the subject I didn't mean "A real ninja is a strange choice"... maybe you misunderstood the sense of my post. Next time I'll choose more carefully my words.
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Old Jul 18th, 2002, 04:01 PM   #10
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Well Soooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Yes it can be about friendship but I was talkin about love and how usually I'm the one hurt in the end...
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Old Jul 23rd, 2002, 02:28 PM   #11
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That's a really good poem S4H
I liked it, keep it up!
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