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Old May 11th, 2002, 07:05 PM   #1
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invincible 9

here it is

Chapter XII
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For a while I kept falling in and out of consciousness, I did awaken in a room, that was all white, and I was strapped to a table. Later on when I was fully awake, I was fully clothed and felt a little weak but I was fine in a while. I got up and looked around and noticed that the people in the room, were me. Yeah they were me, clones made from me when they hit me with the laser. Well back to the matter at hand, what am I to do, fighting the ultimate enemy, my self. Well I stood up as did they, the ten or so of them surrounded me with me in the middle of the circle of clones, but there was one way that you could tell that they were not me, it was the eyes. I get up and see the door, my escape but as I tried to make it to the door, they stopped me, my speed and strength was matched in every way. Everything that I did was countered by my clones, I finally met my match, or did I. As the fight went one one versus ten, They all got in a line and and they like me before were engulfed in flames, but theirs were red, then they attacked. The fight seemed like it took forever, I thought that it was hard before, their fists when they hit felt like brick walls hitting me, over and over again.

Finally one time they hit me to the ground, and assembled another line. They stood there all ten, red of them. I get up whipe some of the blood from my eye, and stand straight up.

“Fine then, there is one thing that I have that you don’t,” I began.

“We have everything that you have and more, this up grade to red is much more powerful than our normal state, and you cant go up like we can, and that makes us stronger than you,” said the clones in unison.

“Well that is where you are wrong,” I said as a small smirk came across my face.

“Huh?” the clones said.

As the clones stood in wonder about what their enemy had been talking about, I clench my fist and think about my house and the way that it used to look, and how much I miss the way that I lived my life, and that it would never be the same again. That gave me the power to have my upgrade, I threw my fists up in the air and them down,
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“You may have me, her but you will never take my SOUL!”I said, then in an instance much like the last time, my hair and my body were turned blue and the flames took over, as this happened a white glaze covered my eyes. “Now DIE.”

They looked at me like I was nuts, their upgrade was no match for mine. This time I led the assault, I took them out quickly, I appeared in between two of them and took them out with out them even knowing what had hit them, the other ones then noticed that they could not beat me. So then they tried to leave, but I wouldn’t let them, the door was closed so then they tried to fly out and create a whole in the room. I stopped them, I kicked through one of them and punched through another ones head. The other six led a full out attack on me, but it was useless, I kicked one into a group of them splitting them up. As they took flight I appeared above one of them and hit one of them to the ground, but just my luck the door opened and the brought in the laser and tried to shoot me with it but this time I was ready, with laser beams and clones flying all around, I push and threw a couple of them into the laser, causing them to desintigrate, I guess that they turned up the dossage, this time the laser was not intended to sedate me but kill me. Now were down to one clone, one laser, and me, I quickly grabbed the clone and held him while the laser was shot at us. He died and I didn’t. I then walked up to the laser held up my hand, that was open and aimed it at the laser, I looked a way, let out a burst of strength, then looked at the laser and it was blown up and destroyed.

Chapter XIII
Final Battle

As I stepped through the rubble of the laser and the destroyed room, I look around and realize that I am in the enemy ship.

“Ha Ha, this will be fun,”I said as I went through the ship, room by room. I started my search for the bastard that started all of this. I made my way throught the ship and spoted the entrence to where the entity was, but it was gaurded by four gaurds, that were outside the door.
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Old May 11th, 2002, 07:30 PM   #2
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I cannot keep on repeating you that I like your story! I know it's not an interesting comment! But I'm hooked to it and now it sems you're going to post the last parts of it! I can't wait to read all of it!
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Old May 11th, 2002, 08:24 PM   #3
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I am so glad that you like it, but what will happen when it is over, should I write something else, I love the fact that you love it, more to come soon, if you thought this was a twist wait till the end
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Old May 11th, 2002, 08:26 PM   #4
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Are those... sparks of love ? I think they are !

Nah, I'm just jokin' with ya... Koodos on the story though.
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Old May 12th, 2002, 10:28 AM   #5
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I'm not going to bother posting something long and elaborant this time. I'd just be the same as thge others. Just for now, I'll say keep it up. I enjoy it and I want more.

Sorry I didn't say anything else, I'm tired right now, and my fingers hurt.
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Old May 12th, 2002, 11:12 AM   #6
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thats fine CC I probably know what you will say anyway, but the end is coming
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Old May 14th, 2002, 08:45 AM   #7
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You're doing a good work Bond
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Invincible. you have part 10 and others, well nice poem bond!!
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