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May 15th, 2002, 04:34 PM | #1 |
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OMG I wrote a poem!
I wrote this poem for English class...
Can you guess who the poems about? The Aging Ronin by: Sword 4 Hire (Adam) Back from the depths of sleepless dreams Aging, yet stronger Wiser Threads of time intertwine around the scars And the memories Leaning against the shadows Adjusting his shades Fragments of gray decorate the outskirts of his fractured armor Katana fastened tight between the experienced fingers of yesterday Piercing through the inevitability of destruction His dark soul vibrant with hope Our paths diverged for the moment...
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May 15th, 2002, 05:50 PM | #2 |
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Uhmm...I have no precise ideas on what this poem is about. I mean, who is the protagonist of this poem.
But feel like I should know I'm not good in this kind of things! But the poem in itself is nice |
May 15th, 2002, 06:16 PM | #3 |
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Uhm., no guess at all.
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May 15th, 2002, 08:34 PM | #4 |
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Well I'll tell you since this isn't really supposed to be a riddle...I just thought it'd be nice if for once I posted something that I made. It's about my favorite character Auron from FFX.
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May 15th, 2002, 11:39 PM | #5 |
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Ah! I knew it!...What? I did!
That's a very nice poem S4H!! Really, it's great! You also made an excellent choice for your character! At first, I thought it was about Seifer though. That too would have been an extraordinary choice! Again, great poem! |
May 16th, 2002, 11:45 AM | #6 |
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Yeah, it was not so difficult to guess! But I'm late, so heh it'll be for the next time!
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May 16th, 2002, 06:38 PM | #7 |
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Thank you for the compliments...maybe I'll post more
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May 17th, 2002, 01:38 AM | #8 |
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Hey, that was pretty good, dude. I'm glad you posted it.
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Jun 11th, 2002, 10:28 AM | #9 |
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Cool Poem..
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Jul 13th, 2002, 09:52 PM | #10 |
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missed it? How could I?
OM, I can't believe I missed this poem! *hits head* This is one of the best poems I've read! Dude, I can't believe it. I love the words and the images are astonding! This is awesome!!! It's like coffee...Gimme more! Great, great, great, great poem! I'm not kidding!
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Jul 14th, 2002, 05:29 PM | #11 |
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That was pretty creative. I like the whole riddle thingy to it. Nice work.
I try to keep all of my posts regarding fan fiction and gallery unique and different, to show that i really like the work that is put on these forums, but i've posted to so many awesome things that I can't come up with anything new that gives the artists credit that they deserve. Anyways, great job, glad to see something from you in thgis forum.
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