I can feel the fire

Lost_myth · Nov 19th, 2003, 08:02 PM

I can feel the fire; can you see the flame?
You hear the screams, but I feel the iniquitous torture.
My mind drifting away, you sense my failure.
You come to save me, I know your presence is drawing nearer.
My spirit lifting, we are together.

It's purified love
unlimited despite all circumstances..
A love that can capture and squeeze all the life and blood out of one's heart.
And make it accelerate chaotically,
It's velocity dividing in multiple directions.
Causing it to shoot up and splinter into the flesh of another's brain
Or it could freeze a beat in an instant
A feeling so pungent that it can
withstand
the break down of all man,
the Jaws of Life and death that are released from a little golden box
that's unable to commit genocide.
For the stronghold can accommodate
any companionship, even that of a French bulldog or Boston Terrier.

A love that feels unbound
Similar to a ride on your favorite motorcycle
Traversing over the hills of a country road
The cool wind softly caressing your weary face
As you find the pot of gold on the other side of the rainbow

Meiko · Nov 24th, 2003, 12:00 AM

This starts as a tortured poem but ends being somewhat the hymn to the power of one's love, which as you say, has no bounds and limits, and after the torture the sense of eternity and liberty comes comfort us and to make us enjoy this feeling. Like the flame which purifies whatever it burns. It's developed in a very interesting way imo. I love it, it's excellent! Hope I haven't said anything stupid with my brief and silly interpretation.

Lost_myth · Nov 24th, 2003, 12:27 AM

No that wasn't silly or stupid at all. You made my day, I love comments! No sarcasm involved, I am serious.

Rei · Nov 24th, 2003, 01:14 AM

I find it a rather accurate description of love (and more precisely, of being in love). You must have known what love is to write anything so accurate, if not I find it really amazing (not the poem, which is good in any case, but the fact you can describe love so well if you haven't experienced it).

Nov 19th, 2003, 08:02 PM	#1
Lost_myth Every One Dies Alone Joined: May 2002 Location: In the depths of existance where the hot magma flows. Age: 37 Posts: 1,057	I can feel the fire I can feel the fire; can you see the flame? You hear the screams, but I feel the iniquitous torture. My mind drifting away, you sense my failure. You come to save me, I know your presence is drawing nearer. My spirit lifting, we are together. It's purified love unlimited despite all circumstances.. A love that can capture and squeeze all the life and blood out of one's heart. And make it accelerate chaotically, It's velocity dividing in multiple directions. Causing it to shoot up and splinter into the flesh of another's brain Or it could freeze a beat in an instant A feeling so pungent that it can withstand the break down of all man, the Jaws of Life and death that are released from a little golden box that's unable to commit genocide. For the stronghold can accommodate any companionship, even that of a French bulldog or Boston Terrier. A love that feels unbound Similar to a ride on your favorite motorcycle Traversing over the hills of a country road The cool wind softly caressing your weary face As you find the pot of gold on the other side of the rainbow __________________ All around me are familiar faces Worn out places Worn out faces Bright & early for the daily races Going nowhere Going nowhere Their tears R filling up their glasses No Xpression No Xpression Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows No 2morrow No 2morrow & I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad. These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had

Nov 24th, 2003, 12:27 AM	#3
Lost_myth Every One Dies Alone Joined: May 2002 Location: In the depths of existance where the hot magma flows. Age: 37 Posts: 1,057	No that wasn't silly or stupid at all. You made my day, I love comments! No sarcasm involved, I am serious. __________________ All around me are familiar faces Worn out places Worn out faces Bright & early for the daily races Going nowhere Going nowhere Their tears R filling up their glasses No Xpression No Xpression Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows No 2morrow No 2morrow & I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad. These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had

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I can feel the fire

Nov 24th, 2003, 12:00 AM	#2
Meiko Senior Member Joined: Jun 2003 Location: Wales Age: 37 Posts: 537	This starts as a tortured poem but ends being somewhat the hymn to the power of one's love, which as you say, has no bounds and limits, and after the torture the sense of eternity and liberty comes comfort us and to make us enjoy this feeling. Like the flame which purifies whatever it burns. It's developed in a very interesting way imo. I love it, it's excellent! Hope I haven't said anything stupid with my brief and silly interpretation.

Nov 24th, 2003, 01:14 AM	#4
Rei EVA 00 Pilot Joined: Jan 2002 Location: NERV Age: 41 Posts: 2,239	I find it a rather accurate description of love (and more precisely, of being in love). You must have known what love is to write anything so accurate, if not I find it really amazing (not the poem, which is good in any case, but the fact you can describe love so well if you haven't experienced it).


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