A Perfect Circle of a Hazel Spirit--PSR

Lost_myth · Jul 7th, 2004, 02:38 PM

A Perfect Circle of a Hazel Spirit

Turn the volume dial to dilute my voice and warble along with the words to bond the meaning of my soul. Softly slam my eyes to disappear into a world of my own.

I don't always have the music to mute my voice because sometimes I want to be heard, but then my voice stumbles and two thoughts combine that begot a halfwit outcome. I'm not completely here. Can you tell?

It tinkers with the senses of this world because my imagination exceeds my cata-awry dreams. I like to think of the unlogical as another layer of this world, sort of like an onion but with the layering meld, beyond people and beyond what we categorize as universal time.

Am I supposed to believe that life is like The Truman Show before he discovered the lies? That there's nothing beyond our society; someone chose our destiny and that there's a man-made wall to our ocean? Or am I supposed to believe in fairytales; The Blue Fairy will make mommy love the poor mechanical child, that someone will save you and it's not inevitable to die alone?

Pay attention to the bold color tones of muti braceletts that hang from my wrists, to the silver shine of my twisted earings reflecting from the light and to my odd, yet simple tastes in clothes. Who am I to you? Am I just a stupid girl that spirts out random information; an ignorant debate, an arrogant scream of recognition...Do I exist to be noticed?

I don't know what you see because when I stare, things fall to particles. Everything fragmented, no longer a whole, atoms stuck perfectly together, like a puzzle you can't seperate.

PSR

Lost_myth · Jul 9th, 2004, 10:52 PM

Has anyone read this?

Redpyramidhead · Jul 10th, 2004, 09:26 AM

Pammy, this is very engrossing writing. It's like a poetic essay... written with some kind of wandering prose... I can feel your personality and its delightful eccentricities coming through the words... this is a theme in most of your writing that I quite enjoy

"Turn the volume dial to dilute my voice and warble along with the words to bond the meaning of my soul. Softly slam my eyes to disappear into a world of my own."

For a lot of people the opening part of a poem is quite vital. I'd say this is a fantastic opening. Even though it would seem to most people quite abstract, I get a lot of imagery out of your writing. That must be a unique skill

_RED_ stuff

Lost_myth · Jul 11th, 2004, 01:17 PM

Thanks Mark, I love you.

Jul 7th, 2004, 02:38 PM	#1
Lost_myth Every One Dies Alone Joined: May 2002 Location: In the depths of existance where the hot magma flows. Age: 37 Posts: 1,057	A Perfect Circle of a Hazel Spirit--PSR A Perfect Circle of a Hazel Spirit Turn the volume dial to dilute my voice and warble along with the words to bond the meaning of my soul. Softly slam my eyes to disappear into a world of my own. I don't always have the music to mute my voice because sometimes I want to be heard, but then my voice stumbles and two thoughts combine that begot a halfwit outcome. I'm not completely here. Can you tell? It tinkers with the senses of this world because my imagination exceeds my cata-awry dreams. I like to think of the unlogical as another layer of this world, sort of like an onion but with the layering meld, beyond people and beyond what we categorize as universal time. Am I supposed to believe that life is like The Truman Show before he discovered the lies? That there's nothing beyond our society; someone chose our destiny and that there's a man-made wall to our ocean? Or am I supposed to believe in fairytales; The Blue Fairy will make mommy love the poor mechanical child, that someone will save you and it's not inevitable to die alone? Pay attention to the bold color tones of muti braceletts that hang from my wrists, to the silver shine of my twisted earings reflecting from the light and to my odd, yet simple tastes in clothes. Who am I to you? Am I just a stupid girl that spirts out random information; an ignorant debate, an arrogant scream of recognition...Do I exist to be noticed? I don't know what you see because when I stare, things fall to particles. Everything fragmented, no longer a whole, atoms stuck perfectly together, like a puzzle you can't seperate. PSR

Jul 9th, 2004, 10:52 PM	#2
Lost_myth Every One Dies Alone Joined: May 2002 Location: In the depths of existance where the hot magma flows. Age: 37 Posts: 1,057	Has anyone read this? __________________ All around me are familiar faces Worn out places Worn out faces Bright & early for the daily races Going nowhere Going nowhere Their tears R filling up their glasses No Xpression No Xpression Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows No 2morrow No 2morrow & I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad. These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had

Jul 10th, 2004, 09:26 AM	#3
Redpyramidhead pazparacolombia Joined: Sep 2002 Location: Restless dreams... Age: 43 Posts: 2,002	Pammy, this is very engrossing writing. It's like a poetic essay... written with some kind of wandering prose... I can feel your personality and its delightful eccentricities coming through the words... this is a theme in most of your writing that I quite enjoy "Turn the volume dial to dilute my voice and warble along with the words to bond the meaning of my soul. Softly slam my eyes to disappear into a world of my own." For a lot of people the opening part of a poem is quite vital. I'd say this is a fantastic opening. Even though it would seem to most people quite abstract, I get a lot of imagery out of your writing. That must be a unique skill _RED_ stuff __________________ "..loathsome laughing, mixed with such a cry as no man has heard save for in the phlegathon of unrelatable nightmares; a cry wherein reverberated the horror and anguish of a haunted lifetime packed into one atrocious moment..."

Jul 11th, 2004, 01:17 PM	#4
Lost_myth Every One Dies Alone Joined: May 2002 Location: In the depths of existance where the hot magma flows. Age: 37 Posts: 1,057	Thanks Mark, I love you. __________________ All around me are familiar faces Worn out places Worn out faces Bright & early for the daily races Going nowhere Going nowhere Their tears R filling up their glasses No Xpression No Xpression Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows No 2morrow No 2morrow & I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad. These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had

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