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Nov 14th, 2004, 06:56 PM | #1 |
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three;
these are the lyrics for the three songs i have written in the last week. criticism/comments welcome. flow may be odd due to guitar lines having to fit around them.
xx nine life start; orange oceans / garden centres and a world that will not spin and all the years that i was under just brought me right back to this point and all my dreams are forever falling to a point of no return and all the secrets that i would tell you are now forgotten in their time. so sleep tonight sleep tonight nine life start and maybe eight are gone and this is the one one chance left and the moon still shines on what we knew and time slipped by and i missed the joy of you seventeen to twenty one life in transit, old joys gone so sleep tonight sleep tonight nine life start and maybe eight are gone and this was the one the one chance left fading; the kiss / that i missed / your lips and his / my hips / my noise / her eyes / your lies / the city / my night light / my night life / will sleep tight / yet your lies / and her eyes, and her eyes ... this rain, this fucking rain the same, born and grew apart the snow, it's always far too cold the end, stay late don't go ten times eight is not enough flames and fire keep things resolved poet laureate just sold us out my dreams of death are only that, dreams. this is my noise. last; and these will be the last moments of my earth the last thoughts of my soul the last regrets to let go the last sights that i will know so now rose petals falling soundless final curtain spirals doubtless i will be yet left singing here snowflakes close the final action that life signals no reaction to the news it is over if this will be the final song that i will ever sing may it bring love together and we'll sing annihilation one last time before cheap sex cheap wine takes it's toll on you i want you to know that i cannot hate you but they will take their toll on everything that we grew in our souls forever so.
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Nov 15th, 2004, 08:43 AM | #2 |
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Woo creepy stuff..they seem to have a sort of dark/painful feeling..but i like it a lot, especially the second one..great stuff Faile
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Jan 11th, 2005, 12:07 AM | #3 |
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fading i liked a lot... very fucking cool ... goddamn.. i wish i could hear the audio intended for these... heh... but.. um... yeah.. good stuff keep it up
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Jan 15th, 2005, 09:45 AM | #4 |
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Hopefully when I can get on the internet a little more I can sort you out with a link to the file. It's all recorded and ready to go!
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