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Jan 9th, 2003, 11:20 AM | #1 |
Every One Dies Alone
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Cow & dog
It seemed like an awfully long day.
My cow had gone away. I can't find it. Gee golly. I'd gave it a good hit. Bet sparky can find her. What? Oh great, sure... Here, he not lay. What is that, by the hay? Sparky and the heifer got away. P.S.R.
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All around me are familiar faces Worn out places Worn out faces Bright & early for the daily races Going nowhere Going nowhere Their tears R filling up their glasses No Xpression No Xpression Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows No 2morrow No 2morrow & I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad. These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had |
Jan 9th, 2003, 03:36 PM | #2 |
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That's a funny poem, I liked it. Poem's should have laughter in it sometimes. That was nice Chick3nWire.
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Jan 10th, 2003, 02:57 AM | #3 |
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That Cow and Dog thing actually gives me a good idea...I'll be back with what I'm talking about soon.
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Jan 10th, 2003, 04:37 PM | #4 |
Every One Dies Alone
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Ok... I'm clueless.
Thanks David. This poem was actually created because Gamer asked me to write about a cow and a dog..."make it happy too." This is as happy as it gets. The dog and the cow escape the abusive farmer!
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All around me are familiar faces Worn out places Worn out faces Bright & early for the daily races Going nowhere Going nowhere Their tears R filling up their glasses No Xpression No Xpression Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows No 2morrow No 2morrow & I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad. These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had |
Jan 10th, 2003, 05:19 PM | #5 |
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email it to him then. this has no worth here.
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Jan 10th, 2003, 05:26 PM | #6 |
Every One Dies Alone
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Faile, you sound so bitter. Of course it has worth here. I like to share it with my fellow forum members.
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All around me are familiar faces Worn out places Worn out faces Bright & early for the daily races Going nowhere Going nowhere Their tears R filling up their glasses No Xpression No Xpression Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows No 2morrow No 2morrow & I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad. These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had |
Jan 11th, 2003, 08:20 AM | #7 |
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i'm not bitter, i just do not like spam. which this is.
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Jan 11th, 2003, 01:29 PM | #8 |
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how are you to say that something someone wrote is spam? Maybe it was just meant to be light hearted, as I'm sure it was. Sure, its not the deepest poem ever created but they dont all have to be, open your mind... goodness.
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Jan 11th, 2003, 02:03 PM | #9 | |
Every One Dies Alone
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All around me are familiar faces Worn out places Worn out faces Bright & early for the daily races Going nowhere Going nowhere Their tears R filling up their glasses No Xpression No Xpression Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows No 2morrow No 2morrow & I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad. These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had |
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Jan 11th, 2003, 06:38 PM | #10 |
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that is not poetry. it has no worth here. i'm going to lock this thread tomorrow. This is spam. Sorry.
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Jan 12th, 2003, 12:13 AM | #11 |
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what do u mean this is not a poem faile, this is a beautiful poem, i love it chick3n wire
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Jan 12th, 2003, 06:28 AM | #12 | |
ys.
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it has no poetical worth. Therefore it is spam. A collection of rhyming words is not suited to a gaming fanfic forum. The poetry aspect of this forum does indeed include more lighthearted pieces of poetry, yet this isn't one of them.
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