This sucks

AudioBoxer · Nov 5th, 2002, 10:56 PM

It sucks
It sucks when you see it
I had it happen to me
Some people have
Some not
It made me and others cry
As you can see I am fine now
But I still dream
I cry nights to nights
Not no more
But when It happened I felt dead
Dead as she did
My hands felt numb
I could not touch
I couldnt feel her hair
It was the last time
That I would see my mom

This really sucks but I did it like in 2 seconds, it is prob one of the worst poems ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MakgSnake · Nov 12th, 2002, 10:59 PM

Its your thoughts, your instincts...... Pretty good.

playa066 · Nov 16th, 2002, 12:53 PM

pretty dAMN good

AudioBoxer · Nov 16th, 2002, 05:50 PM

For reals though do you really like it? I just made it up like in 10 seconds!

MakgSnake · Nov 16th, 2002, 06:21 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by AudioBoxer
For reals though do you really like it? I just made it up like in 10 seconds!

I know, I mean thats why I said.....your instincts....whatever came in your mind. You kept it real. Neat.

AudioBoxer · Nov 16th, 2002, 06:28 PM

Ight sweet thanx

Ninja · Nov 25th, 2002, 06:53 PM

damn man, same thing happened 2 me, when I was 9 I saw my mom 4 the last time, and never saw her again

Redpyramidhead · Nov 26th, 2002, 12:53 AM

I dug this Audio. Often it's hard to get one's self to be able to be happy with a poem that they have themself write about a specific thing like this, especially something that's such a serious issue. I think you took an interesting approach by just saying what came to your head about things at a given moment. I think you inadvertantly found a solution to this problem in poetry writing. Good job

_RED_ stuff

Nov 5th, 2002, 10:56 PM	#1
AudioBoxer Banned Member Joined: Jul 2002 Location: Some white padded room? Posts: 899	This sucks It sucks It sucks when you see it I had it happen to me Some people have Some not It made me and others cry As you can see I am fine now But I still dream I cry nights to nights Not no more But when It happened I felt dead Dead as she did My hands felt numb I could not touch I couldnt feel her hair It was the last time That I would see my mom This really sucks but I did it like in 2 seconds, it is prob one of the worst poems ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nov 12th, 2002, 10:59 PM	#2
MakgSnake Senior Member Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Mississuaga, Canada. Posts: 3,554	Its your thoughts, your instincts...... Pretty good. __________________

Nov 26th, 2002, 12:53 AM	#8
Redpyramidhead pazparacolombia Joined: Sep 2002 Location: Restless dreams... Age: 43 Posts: 2,002	I dug this Audio. Often it's hard to get one's self to be able to be happy with a poem that they have themself write about a specific thing like this, especially something that's such a serious issue. I think you took an interesting approach by just saying what came to your head about things at a given moment. I think you inadvertantly found a solution to this problem in poetry writing. Good job _RED_ stuff __________________ "..loathsome laughing, mixed with such a cry as no man has heard save for in the phlegathon of unrelatable nightmares; a cry wherein reverberated the horror and anguish of a haunted lifetime packed into one atrocious moment..."

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This sucks

Nov 16th, 2002, 12:53 PM	#3
playa066 Registered User Joined: Nov 2002 Location: here Age: 38 Posts: 8	pretty dAMN good

Nov 16th, 2002, 05:50 PM	#4
AudioBoxer Banned Member Joined: Jul 2002 Location: Some white padded room? Posts: 899	For reals though do you really like it? I just made it up like in 10 seconds!

Nov 16th, 2002, 06:28 PM	#6
AudioBoxer Banned Member Joined: Jul 2002 Location: Some white padded room? Posts: 899	Ight sweet thanx

Nov 25th, 2002, 06:53 PM	#7
Ninja Senior Member Joined: Aug 2002 Age: 35 Posts: 358	damn man, same thing happened 2 me, when I was 9 I saw my mom 4 the last time, and never saw her again


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