Image (a song) by psr

Lost_myth · May 4th, 2004, 09:17 PM

A rose. is just a rose.
and a name. is merely an image.
There are things. to be questioned.
others, are just left alone.
I'm danty. but not to a daisy.
and I see her ...on the road.
I scream. yet I am silent.
I'm solid. but not compared to a rock.
I am bitter thus like sugar.
I am nothing. except everything.
I sing. because I'm happy. even though. I bear sadness.
through my heart, I explain this.
but yet, not converse a word
prayers cannot be answered, when there's not a single sinner.
there are some. who're full of heartaches and others are happy souls
I save you, but still I hurt you.
You are complex but yet very simple
I love you, although hate you
I say this. out of fairness. and let you think it's not
I can't sense you even though I breath you
I can't see the dead but the ground still grows
All that's here is only what I see
but there's more, to life, then just living
and more, to me, then just an image.

Redpyramidhead · May 4th, 2004, 11:54 PM

Pam! Absolutely breathtaking! I would have to say this is one of your more symbolic and metaphysical approaches filled with abstract ideas...or is it just me? I don't think so, anyway

I could be nuts, but I think your touching on some seriously out their concepts here. I want to see more, soon!

_RED_ stuff

Hylas · May 8th, 2004, 12:19 PM

This is absolutely beautiful. You used the punctuation in a very emotional way. Reading this was like hearing somebody whispering those words. To say it better, it made me think the person saying those words is awake whispering them to the ear of somebody who's asleep.

Pu the Owl · May 10th, 2004, 08:11 PM

To me sounds more like a sigh than a simple whisper. No, not exactly... A whispered sigh. But yes, I think it has great impact, especially if you read trying to whisper the words instead of simply looking at the text.

My comment wasn't very clear, I guess

May 4th, 2004, 09:17 PM	#1
Lost_myth Every One Dies Alone Joined: May 2002 Location: In the depths of existance where the hot magma flows. Age: 37 Posts: 1,057	Image (a song) by psr A rose. is just a rose. and a name. is merely an image. There are things. to be questioned. others, are just left alone. I'm danty. but not to a daisy. and I see her ...on the road. I scream. yet I am silent. I'm solid. but not compared to a rock. I am bitter thus like sugar. I am nothing. except everything. I sing. because I'm happy. even though. I bear sadness. through my heart, I explain this. but yet, not converse a word prayers cannot be answered, when there's not a single sinner. there are some. who're full of heartaches and others are happy souls I save you, but still I hurt you. You are complex but yet very simple I love you, although hate you I say this. out of fairness. and let you think it's not I can't sense you even though I breath you I can't see the dead but the ground still grows All that's here is only what I see but there's more, to life, then just living and more, to me, then just an image. __________________ All around me are familiar faces Worn out places Worn out faces Bright & early for the daily races Going nowhere Going nowhere Their tears R filling up their glasses No Xpression No Xpression Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows No 2morrow No 2morrow & I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad. These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had Last edited by Lost_myth; May 4th, 2004 at 09:44 PM..

May 4th, 2004, 11:54 PM	#2
Redpyramidhead pazparacolombia Joined: Sep 2002 Location: Restless dreams... Age: 43 Posts: 2,002	Pam! Absolutely breathtaking! I would have to say this is one of your more symbolic and metaphysical approaches filled with abstract ideas...or is it just me? I don't think so, anyway I could be nuts, but I think your touching on some seriously out their concepts here. I want to see more, soon! _RED_ stuff __________________ "..loathsome laughing, mixed with such a cry as no man has heard save for in the phlegathon of unrelatable nightmares; a cry wherein reverberated the horror and anguish of a haunted lifetime packed into one atrocious moment..."

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May 8th, 2004, 12:19 PM	#3
Hylas Now or Never Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Zürich Age: 42 Posts: 2,456	This is absolutely beautiful. You used the punctuation in a very emotional way. Reading this was like hearing somebody whispering those words. To say it better, it made me think the person saying those words is awake whispering them to the ear of somebody who's asleep.

May 10th, 2004, 08:11 PM	#4
Pu the Owl Useless Oracle™ Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Everywhere Posts: 5,136	To me sounds more like a sigh than a simple whisper. No, not exactly... A whispered sigh. But yes, I think it has great impact, especially if you read trying to whisper the words instead of simply looking at the text. My comment wasn't very clear, I guess


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