Unfinished and Untitled

Redpyramidhead · Mar 16th, 2003, 04:22 AM

Unfinished and Untitled

by

Redpyramidhead

So you can't breathe into me now
So I can't breathe into you nowww.......

yeah I succomb to myself
rape mine eyes sip fibrous milk
and drink to it in health
and eat from you in sickness
awaken all but died soaked n yet dried
to these sheets...

:::let here writhed in riddle
as you hear my meaningless drivel
no slow death is civil:::

<~ ~ ~ wither demon wither
wither and come hither
become even thinner
to dare you
to dare you
wither demon wither
wither and come hither
become even thinner ~ ~ ~>

yeah i succumb to myself
everything sore
are mine eyes
<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<re-aDjust>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
sip fibrous milk
and sleep the sleep of the unjust
the gift of eternal unrest

And drink to it in health
and eat from me in sickness
awaken all but died soaked n yet dried
to these sheets...........

_RED_ stuff

Gadzoox · Mar 17th, 2003, 10:32 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Redpyramidhead
:::let here writhed in riddle
as you hear my meaningless drivel
no slow death is civil:::

This whole thing is great; I particularly like that part though, but i can't say why.

Rei · Mar 23rd, 2003, 05:17 AM

This is maybe off-topic, but can I ask what's the meaning of the usage of symbols like ~~> or ::? Is it of any use indicating those part of the poems are going to be changed?

Mar 16th, 2003, 04:22 AM	#1
Redpyramidhead pazparacolombia Joined: Sep 2002 Location: Restless dreams... Age: 43 Posts: 2,002	Unfinished and Untitled Unfinished and Untitled by Redpyramidhead So you can't breathe into me now So I can't breathe into you nowww....... yeah I succomb to myself rape mine eyes sip fibrous milk and drink to it in health and eat from you in sickness awaken all but died soaked n yet dried to these sheets... :::let here writhed in riddle as you hear my meaningless drivel no slow death is civil::: <~ ~ ~ wither demon wither wither and come hither become even thinner to dare you to dare you wither demon wither wither and come hither become even thinner ~ ~ ~> yeah i succumb to myself everything sore are mine eyes <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<re-aDjust>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> sip fibrous milk and sleep the sleep of the unjust the gift of eternal unrest And drink to it in health and eat from me in sickness awaken all but died soaked n yet dried to these sheets........... _RED_ stuff __________________ "..loathsome laughing, mixed with such a cry as no man has heard save for in the phlegathon of unrelatable nightmares; a cry wherein reverberated the horror and anguish of a haunted lifetime packed into one atrocious moment..."

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Mar 23rd, 2003, 05:17 AM	#3
Rei EVA 00 Pilot Joined: Jan 2002 Location: NERV Age: 41 Posts: 2,239	This is maybe off-topic, but can I ask what's the meaning of the usage of symbols like ~~> or ::? Is it of any use indicating those part of the poems are going to be changed?


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