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Jun 13th, 2002, 07:01 AM
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Joined: Jun 2002
Age: 38
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Poem
I wrote a poem. Don't like it if you don't want to:
I don't see how you could possibly ask If the love we have is true If only you could realize My only thoughts are of you You're always on my mind You're always in my heart I only hope and pray That we may never part The love I feel for you Is truly one of a kind And I hope it may last forever Because more like it I'll never find Each time we are together Even more am I reassured That soon all your doubts Might finally be cured I know what comes with being so close With all the emotions, there is clutter But trust me when I tell you The love we have is like no other |
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Jun 13th, 2002, 09:35 PM
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 Joined: Jun 2002
Location: Zapadocesky Czech Republic
Age: 41
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Nice poem!!!
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Jun 16th, 2002, 10:16 PM
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Every One Dies Alone
 
Joined: May 2002
Location: In the depths of existance where the hot magma flows.
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That was good..you showed emotion...somewhat of a rhyming scheme, but not everything has to rhyme...Cool, dude!
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All around me are familiar faces Worn out places Worn out faces Bright & early for the daily races Going nowhere Going nowhere Their tears R filling up their glasses No Xpression No Xpression Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows  No 2morrow No 2morrow & I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad. These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had |
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Jun 21st, 2002, 02:47 PM
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The Cynical Clone
 
Joined: Jan 2002
Location: Lakeview Hotel
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Nice poem! You should post other ones!
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Jul 8th, 2002, 12:06 PM
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Drum Disruptor
 
Joined: Jul 2002
Location: Munich, Germany
Age: 46
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Hope, you didn´t have to suffer the feeling of nonrealized love... Good job (Okay: metric sceme...)
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