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Old Apr 27th, 2002, 05:12 PM   #1
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invincible part 7

here it is, like before I hope that you like it



As we starred at each other, I noticed one going for their gun. “No you don’t,” I said. As I raised my guns, he took his hand off. Still mine were pointed directly at them.


“You will not kill us not like this that would be murder,” this force said, in hopes that I would not do what I am about to.

“Is that what it would be? Ok then,” I said, as I slowly put down my guns. A sigh of relief came over them. “Then again say as I abruptly raise my weapons, and as I do they look back at me. I fired three shots, and killed one as the rest ran for the door, but they were stopped by me, in an instance I was there in the way of the door, to them this was still a mystery on how I was able to do this. Now I blocked their only escape and they were trapped, they then got down and pleaded for their lives, showing remorse to a degree. I walk over to them while they plead on their knees. As I am standing above them I look down and put my guns to their heads and pull the trigger repeatedly until they are all dead.

“You had no chance when you started, and it was murder when you killed my sister just returning the favor,” I say as I pull the trigger burring a whole through the last member of the force in this god-awful place.

Chapter IX
The Choice

After the incident I then return to where the broadcasting took place, and sat down in front of a camera and turned it on. At first I just starred in to the camera, as I did I somehow knew that they were starring back at me.

“I see you all out there, everyone of you. All your attempts to kill me as you can see have all failed, you will never win this game. I am giving you 1 hour to get off my planet, my land , and my home. If you are not gone then instead of you hunting me, you will be the hunted. 1 hour that is it.” I say as I through down the mic and arise from sitting behind the desk and shut off the camera.

As I walk over to my sister, I hear that noise that I have heard before, but it was unfamiliar. This made me uneasy. I did not know what that sound was. I then pick up my sister and decide to take her to back to the beginning, home. I walk back home quiet as can be without making a sound, when I got there I buried her with my mother and my brother. I then arose from the kneeling position; as I did "I have failed you mother I let harm come to the ones that I love, what should I do?" I said, as I think to myself. You see this is the first time in my life that I needed help for anything. Then Beep, beep, beep, my watch then goes off, time is up.

"I do not think that they have left yet" I said. I then over my mother’s grave vowed vengeance upon my family.

I then collected my thoughts, for a moment. I then decided to have a little fun at the expense of the force, I went back to the broadcast station, as I traveled there I noticed that I was being watched from a distance of course by none other than the force. When I got there I picked up the mic and positioned the camera directly in front of me.

"Force, I think you have a problem," I began. "You have not listened to the warning that I gave ( While I am saying this the members of the force are passing the television repair shop and they stop to listen.) so now you will face the consequences. When I was young I was taught one thing and one thing only from my father, that when I am faced up against any enemy. Show NO mercy. Here I come."
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Old Apr 27th, 2002, 07:06 PM   #2
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This part ended too early! You can't do this to poor readers
Now I'm terribly curious!
I like the fact you decided to write this story in first person. I forgot telling you this aspect when reading other parts, but I really like the idea. It gives you the impression you're really involved in the story!

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Old Apr 27th, 2002, 08:30 PM   #3
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Well thank you but you will not have any clue about what will happen next, ha ha ha
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Old Apr 27th, 2002, 08:33 PM   #4
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Once again a great part of your story!
But you should give us some hints on what's going on!
Pleeeeaaaaase????
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Old Apr 27th, 2002, 08:45 PM   #5
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Fine then here is a clue, think back to the old man the met him before, the next part of my story will explain it all especially who he really is
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Old Apr 27th, 2002, 08:48 PM   #6
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Good! That really interests me! I'm looking forward to it! Hope it's nothing upsetting
Thanks for your answer !
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Old Apr 29th, 2002, 11:31 AM   #7
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well if you like it so far the next part wont be disappointing
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Old Apr 29th, 2002, 06:53 PM   #8
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I'm glad that you found some more time to write your story. I've been waiting for it for a while. And now that my computer's back, I can keep up with the stories and perhaps I'll finally be able to post some of my story that I had SSSnake post back in the day.
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Old Apr 30th, 2002, 07:22 AM   #9
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Glad to hear that your computer is back working hope to see you more online
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I can't wait to read the next part! Keep it up!
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The wait is almost over, next part up tomorrow and the wait will be worth it
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