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Old Feb 21st, 2004, 09:29 AM   #21
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So. Are you going to grace our presence with more of these? PLEASE?!

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Old Feb 21st, 2004, 11:19 AM   #22
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Wink Your wish is Granted...

Ok Im sorry for the people who are hoping for something a little bit brighter and uplifting, I don't feel any happiness inside of me so I can't write it.

Here goes..

As I lay here on the floor
Staring up at the ceiling
The loud music vibrates around me
I feel myself slipping away
With every second I become more distant
This world around me dissolving quickly
My breaths become slower
I let myself go
as I take my last breath
Now I am nothing.

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Old Feb 21st, 2004, 12:12 PM   #23
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Excellent work Piggle, it's good to see you're not forcing yourself to write what you don't feel. Poetry should come from the heart and it looks like you realise that.

Once again I look forward to anymore poetry you may produce but don't force yourself to write if you're not in the mood for it, as you won't receive the same effect.

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Old Feb 23rd, 2004, 07:26 PM   #24
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Thanks Dactrius. And no need to worry.. If it's not there I can't write it. I can't force myself to write anything, it's either there or it isn't, no inbetween for me.

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Old Feb 24th, 2004, 02:32 PM   #25
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WoW... another good one... i cant help myself but in everything lately i keep seein NIN references... example you say?

"Myself slipping away"-into the void- fragile left side

"Now Im Nothing" - eraser- The downward spiral also.. nin abbrieviation... nevermind... .perhaps i am just nuts...


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Old Feb 24th, 2004, 08:10 PM   #26
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Hey Trunks what are u trying to say!!

Well Trunks...
A thousand lips a thousand tongues
A thousand throats a thousand lungs
A thousand ways to make it true
I want to do terrible things to you
j/k

Well I swear my stuff is all outta my own brain.
This one actually was inspired by something I experienced the day before I wrote it, I had the house to myself so I stuck Muse's Album on and turned it up and just lay on the floor staring up at the ceiling and after a while it felt like i'd taken an overdoes or something coz I felt really weird and even though the music was extremely loud it just sounded faded in the background and I felt all fuzzy and not altogether there.. just feeling the vibrations through the floor. It was a strange feeling but also nice as for that little while my brain seem to shut off from all my worries. And thats how it came about.

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Old Feb 25th, 2004, 03:05 AM   #27
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Hey Trunks what are u trying to say!!

Well Trunks...
A thousand lips a thousand tongues
A thousand throats a thousand lungs
A thousand ways to make it true
I want to do terrible things to you
j/k

Well I swear my stuff is all outta my own brain.
This one actually was inspired by something I experienced the day before I wrote it, I had the house to myself so I stuck Muse's Album on and turned it up and just lay on the floor staring up at the ceiling and after a while it felt like i'd taken an overdoes or something coz I felt really weird and even though the music was extremely loud it just sounded faded in the background and I felt all fuzzy and not altogether there.. just feeling the vibrations through the floor. It was a strange feeling but also nice as for that little while my brain seem to shut off from all my worries. And thats how it came about.

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I meant no offense... I am just crazy about nails and i was just sayin how lately everything i see hear or read seems to have some ties w/ it... nothing against you I wouldnt have complimented it if i didnt like it

So keep up the good work and ignore me
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Old Feb 26th, 2004, 11:32 AM   #28
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So keep up the good work and ignore me
Easily Done.. Trunks who J/k
I was only winding you up! I know you worship me!

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Old Mar 5th, 2004, 12:23 AM   #29
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I Like this one. It sounds like somebody slowly ceasing to exist and the phrasing flows into the next line well and so on. Not many people have the hang of that in their poetry so it doesn't take you with them on their journey. Even though this is a short poem it suggests a much longer journey with fewer words.


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Old Mar 28th, 2004, 12:37 PM   #30
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Unhappy New Stuff

1st one:
Tears fall down my cheeks, staining my face
So much pain inside me, it hurts to breathe
I want to fall to the ground, to throw myself in
but that space is not for me.
As I watch them pass all dressed in black,
heads bowed, holding onto that box
its everyday for them, routine and no emotion
Slowly it lowers and prayers read aloud
I feel numb, This cant be right
Why does god want all the good ones.


2nd One:
[B[Years pass by and memories start to fade
I try to hold on to smell and sound
but the older I become the more distant they seem
The colour of her eyes , the sound of her voice
the feeling of her holding me..
Its no longer there yet I dont feel much sadness
How are you supposed to love somebody you never really knew
but I do.. and I always will.

~ Originals by Piggle Humsy.[/B]
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Old Mar 28th, 2004, 08:16 PM   #31
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My God, Piggle, Piggle, You're always such a happy and upbeat person on the forums, but your writings are so sad. Why? Your poetry is very good, i love reading them, but why must it be soo unbelievably depressing? I'm sure that there must be something happy lying deep in your mind and heart to write about. Cheer up yo, and write about it, kay?
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Old Apr 7th, 2004, 05:47 AM   #32
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Whoops, sorry about the late reply to this, I forgot to come in here.

Love your new poem Piggle, though Cannibal Clown is right, your work is rather depressing. That said my advice is to keep writing what you feel. If writing sad poetry is how you release your feelings then let it flow!

Keep this up, me wants more!
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Old Apr 8th, 2004, 01:38 AM   #33
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Aww thanks ppl!

Im not sure why I can't seem to write happy stuff... I just find it easier to express my grief this way.

If I ever write something happy you'll be the first to know!

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Old Apr 17th, 2004, 08:03 PM   #34
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I find these last two interesting in the way they really depict (for me atleast) the feeling of life or liveliness being drained from you due to hardships and anything in your mind you might be dealing with. It puts me right there in your mind and that is talent right there.

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A new one, A Little different from my usual so I was a little hesitant to put it up, but I gave in so here it is...

Looking through the glass,
As I watch these people pass,
They don't know Im here,
I watch them all in fear,
The thought of being seen,
Of being judged, they can be so mean,
A look, a word, a sigh,
A Glance as I walk by,
I panic deep inside,
So I stay hidden for all of time.

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Old Aug 5th, 2004, 09:07 PM   #36
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Talking

Ok The last one seems to have gone unnoticed but never mind I'm here with some more... and don't pass out or anything but IT'S HAPPY!
Yes that's right! Finally I'm feeling happy inside and it shows!
So here goes...

I see him standing there,
with a smile upon his face,
as I start to walk towards him,
suddenly he seems a thousand miles away,
my stomach starts to turn,
and my palms are full of sweat,
my heart feels like it's stopped,
One step after another,
suddenly speeding straight ahead,
a matter of seconds and there I am,
face to face with him.
I'm so close I can see every imperfection,
the little lines and scars over his soft skin,
His big blue eyes staring straight at me,
He leans in and his lips brush against mine,
I feel a sudden rush and then I close my eyes,
Lost in this world of happiness,
As his arms close around me,
I've never felt so safe.

~ A Piggle Original

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Old Aug 6th, 2004, 03:59 AM   #37
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Nice one Piggle..happy at last
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Old Aug 6th, 2004, 08:09 PM   #38
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hey piggle thats a great poem i loved it, I can never think of anything to write like that. I've tried to write songs and stuff but it never comes out the way I'd like it to.
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Damn... I keep coming in here far too late. I'm gonna have to put a stop to that!

Great work Piggle, I think you really hit home with this one. The ending was perfect. This was a very descriptive poem, it really does wonders for your writing! ^^

Keep up the work, and keep reflecting your feelings in your poems, it really makes them shine!
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New one.. Hope you like!


Open Book
I lay my feelings out for all,
yet you seem blind.
you don't notice me.
You miss my tears,
deaf to my cries,
why don't you see?
Read Me!
People all around me
Yet I feel so alone,
no-one to talk to
No shoulder to lean on
where are you
Just read me!

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