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[Kimahri]

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I will post this story as soon as i finish it, probably be tomorrow, yes it will be tomorrow, *cause i have just one more paragraph to finish*
I have finished Fantasy *long story* it's just that one more paragraph and i am done, it's a cool story if you have an imagination.
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[Faile]

whens its done, post it in this thread please and not a new one. i look forward to reading it.

[Kimahri]

~Crystal Dreams~

Narrator: This is a story for pain, and suffering in an imaginary world. Take a trip to a fantasy world that can only come true if you believe!

Narrator Two: It all starts with Kraig wakes up from a dream.

Kraig: Whoa! Where am I!? Is this a dream? Is this real? What's going on!?

Maid (Walks into the bedroom, shocked): What is the matter dear?

Kraig: Tell me!

Maid (curious): What do you mean dear?

Kraig (Hollering and jumping out of bed): Tell me where am I?

Maid: My dear, you are in Zygo, your home town.

Kraig: Oh, .......Sorry for the out burst?

Maid: That's all right my dear, ......Oh and Rach is waiting for you outside, remember you and her were going to study together?

Kraig (anxious): Oh I better go! (Leaves in a hurry)

Narrator: Kraig soon meets Rach sitting by the calm shoreline waiting for Kraig to arrive.

Kraig (scratches head): Hey........

Rach: (Jumps up and turns around)

Rach: Oh it's you.

Kraig: Sorr........

Narrator: A rumble is felt.

Kraig and Rach: Whoa!!

Narrator: A leviathian creature rises from the ocean and growls.

Narrator Two: Kraig takes Rach back to his hotel. On their way, they meet up with Suron, (A powerful character in the story)

Kraig (out of breath): BIG......LARGE.......CREATURE.....SHORELINE

Suron: hmph... large creature huh... let me take care of this.

Rach(out of breath): BE......CARE....FUL, (Passes out)

Suron(walks to the shoreline): Be ready, this will only take a moment.

Narrator: The large creature growls.

~To Be Continued`

[Rei]

Kinda short even for an introduction Is it a script or something? Because there's only dialogue in it... Just wondering...

[Kimahri]

Maybe I shouldnt put it like that, and shorten it, it doesnt seem right when I read it, I will add on to it, without dialog, and more longer. Hope it comes out right this time.