Make the most.....

Vicious_2003 · Mar 17th, 2004, 09:51 PM

Another Rhymer...

Time goes on and moons pass by
the sun the stars the endless sky
it all adds up, and burries deep
the years and months and days and weeks

And endless cycle of wake and sleep
the people move as heards of sheep
so many yet so few that make
a difference in this circum shape

I leave you with this one ideal
shed the fake and hold whats real
Time is endless this is true
the difference is just what you do

MAKE THE MOST OF THE TIME YOUR GIVEN

LIVE EVERY DAY LIKE ITS YOUR LAST

Uchiha Sasuke · Mar 18th, 2004, 11:34 AM

Vicious man you should look into being one of those R&B artists. You got the rythym and shit down, and some nice lyrics. Go for the music career.

Vicious_2003 · Mar 18th, 2004, 06:40 PM

Thanks man. I really dig that style of writing. Some people see it as sort of elementary. Im well aware that every line doesent have to rhyme for poetry to be good, thats just sort of how I enjoy it most. Sort of like song lyrics as you said.

tempted · Mar 19th, 2004, 06:12 AM

Really cool Vicious it looks like a description of what happens with people everyday..i think it describes a vicious circle or something...as in people get up ,go thru the day then go back to bed, sometimes without even enjoying life it self..anyway very cool...

Piggle_humsy · Mar 23rd, 2004, 01:28 AM

Ditto what Eli said!
Your stuffs so good!
If you dont want to be in the limelight yourself or you cant for some reason or other then maybe look into writing lyrics for other artists!
Rhyming or not ,it doesnt matter as long as its good, its different for each person.

Piggle

x x x x

Vicious_2003 · Mar 24th, 2004, 07:25 PM

Thanks for the positive feedback

Mar 17th, 2004, 09:51 PM	#1
Vicious_2003 Stationary Wonderer Joined: Apr 2002 Location: In front of my computer Age: 39 Posts: 1,140	Make the most..... Another Rhymer... Time goes on and moons pass by the sun the stars the endless sky it all adds up, and burries deep the years and months and days and weeks And endless cycle of wake and sleep the people move as heards of sheep so many yet so few that make a difference in this circum shape I leave you with this one ideal shed the fake and hold whats real Time is endless this is true the difference is just what you do MAKE THE MOST OF THE TIME YOUR GIVEN LIVE EVERY DAY LIKE ITS YOUR LAST __________________ The kinder, gentler, Vicious Beretta55- "fo sheezy heezy neezy weezy flipity floppity floop" Lost Myth- "I already know you are something special and I think the Pistons did too, because then why would they have won the trophy on your birthday dude? Anonymous- "Whos more to blame, me for being quote un quote gullible ?, or him for lying !?"

Mar 18th, 2004, 11:34 AM	#2
Uchiha Sasuke Cursed Joined: Jan 2002 Location: AWOL! Age: 39 Posts: 3,841	Vicious man you should look into being one of those R&B artists. You got the rythym and shit down, and some nice lyrics. Go for the music career. __________________ *~I've Lost Myself, Life no longer matters~* *~The Official Ps2Fantasy Ninja~* *~A Life Without Love, Is No Life At All~* Social Networks

Mar 18th, 2004, 06:40 PM	#3
Vicious_2003 Stationary Wonderer Joined: Apr 2002 Location: In front of my computer Age: 39 Posts: 1,140	Thanks man. I really dig that style of writing. Some people see it as sort of elementary. Im well aware that every line doesent have to rhyme for poetry to be good, thats just sort of how I enjoy it most. Sort of like song lyrics as you said. __________________ The kinder, gentler, Vicious Beretta55- "fo sheezy heezy neezy weezy flipity floppity floop" Lost Myth- "I already know you are something special and I think the Pistons did too, because then why would they have won the trophy on your birthday dude? Anonymous- "Whos more to blame, me for being quote un quote gullible ?, or him for lying !?"

Mar 23rd, 2004, 01:28 AM	#5
Piggle_humsy The One & Only Joined: Dec 2002 Location: Being Reborn Age: 41 Posts: 2,132	Ditto what Eli said! Your stuffs so good! If you dont want to be in the limelight yourself or you cant for some reason or other then maybe look into writing lyrics for other artists! Rhyming or not ,it doesnt matter as long as its good, its different for each person. Piggle x x x x __________________

Mar 24th, 2004, 07:25 PM	#6
Vicious_2003 Stationary Wonderer Joined: Apr 2002 Location: In front of my computer Age: 39 Posts: 1,140	Thanks for the positive feedback __________________ The kinder, gentler, Vicious Beretta55- "fo sheezy heezy neezy weezy flipity floppity floop" Lost Myth- "I already know you are something special and I think the Pistons did too, because then why would they have won the trophy on your birthday dude? Anonymous- "Whos more to blame, me for being quote un quote gullible ?, or him for lying !?"

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Mar 19th, 2004, 06:12 AM	#4
tempted Senior Member Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 2,265	Really cool Vicious it looks like a description of what happens with people everyday..i think it describes a vicious circle or something...as in people get up ,go thru the day then go back to bed, sometimes without even enjoying life it self..anyway very cool...

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