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Oct 27th, 2004, 08:52 AM | #1 |
Now Im Nothing
Joined: Jan 2002
Location: Rochester, NY
Age: 39
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Just some more things i just need to write...
What is life and where is it going? Searching for the truth but it never shows itself Wandering alone and in the dark It would be so much easier without a broken heart Stuck in a maze i cant find the way out of is there such a thing as gods love? I'm told there is but i cant find it All i feel is rejection and hate Everytime i wake up... is evertime i die Pulled from the dream world where life is great not perfect but better than here I cant know what to think or where to go Surrounded by tradgedy and shit I'm stuck in this life trying to escape i wont get out of it as easy as a gun So i make what i can out of shit Lost my love its forever gone so i just continue to walk on. okay.. that was really shitty... maybe i should stick to rhyming.. what i'm "good" at ..
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Oct 27th, 2004, 01:28 PM | #2 |
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Joined: Aug 2003
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psst! head up ..and it's actually quite good..i've read better coming from you tough..well not better but different..happier ..but you know what?!..if this helps you..ok i know it does so let it all out..
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Oct 29th, 2004, 08:42 PM | #3 |
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Joined: Jan 2002
Location: ex-ex-exeter, disunited kingdom
Age: 40
Posts: 1,137
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I really like the title. It's nicely abstract and minimal. Nice work!
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Oct 30th, 2004, 08:26 AM | #4 |
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Joined: Jun 2004
Location: Hell
Age: 36
Posts: 73
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wow, I liked it, it was vary interesting.
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