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May 7th, 2002, 08:13 AM | #1 |
Pointy Hats Girl
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Some Poems that I wrote
Here are some english poems that I wrote. I mainly write Dutch poems since that is my first language so there aren't many good english ones and there might be some spelling faults etc in it.
------------------ Title: A Tear Written: November 30 2000 A little tear rolls down my cheeck I can be strong but i'm weak Silence is surounding me There is darkness, so that I can't see Nobody is here Just one tear It takes my feelings away And I just can't stay! Loneliness is coming soon to visit me in my room I am strong, not weak The tear will dry out, on my cheeck. ------------------ Title: Sometimes Written: Febuari 2001 Sometimes I feel like the rain Coming when it's not needed Sometimes I feel like the sun Brightly shining, strongly hiding Sometimes I feel like a star You cannot reach the heart Sometimes I feel like the ocean It can be calm, but also wreckless Sometimes I feel like a lonely girl Do I have to face the world alone?? ------------------ Title: <none> Written: June 8, 2001 Do not wait do not fear The rescue is almost here No more pain, no more sorrow You CAN face the day tomorow Help is on it's way Tears are not here to stay You had to wait so long for this and now it's gone, all that loneliness This will hunt the pain away and you can face a brand new day ------------------ Title: The Path Written: June 10 2001 There is a path, to a lovely place There is a path, where we'll walk with a smiling face There is a path, where we'll walk hand in hand There is a path, that leads to the love There is a path, that leads to the clouds above The Clouds where we will dance on, all night Where I can hold you, so very tight To never let you go... But where is that path? I really don't know. ------------------ Title: I'm all better now Written: March 07 2002 It took quit some time, but It came no more pain, sorrow and shame I have new eyes, a new look at life don't want to, don't have to take that knife I got to sleep and wake up with a smile I haven't felt this way for a while I faught and found a better way I've plannend on staying here for a while No more tears, It has finaly came The sun was shining and washed it all away ------------------ Sorry if they are a bit depressing. But these where my feelings from the past 2 years. Hope you like them. |
May 7th, 2002, 11:59 AM | #2 |
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Those are very nice poems Female Vivi!
I especially like the first one. You're very good at writing poems |
May 7th, 2002, 12:51 PM | #3 |
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Very Good.
Hey, Thats A Nice Thing U Did......... Putting Up Ure Poems.....I Liked All Of Em.. But The Last One I Really Liked. Very GOOD.
Liked Them All...!
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May 7th, 2002, 01:19 PM | #4 |
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Those were really good Female Vivi
I liked them all, I hope to see more of your poems up here
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May 7th, 2002, 02:15 PM | #5 |
Pointy Hats Girl
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I was kinda doubting if i should put them on here, positive reactions are good :-) thank you
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May 7th, 2002, 02:53 PM | #6 |
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WOW Vivi! Those are really beautiful poems!
You don't have to think people don't like them, because they're incredibly good! |
May 7th, 2002, 04:03 PM | #7 |
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Very Impressive
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May 7th, 2002, 04:23 PM | #8 |
Pointy Hats Girl
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Oh ! This really means a lot to me. You are the first people who even read these poems :-)
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May 8th, 2002, 12:00 PM | #9 |
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I love your poems Vivi! They're so sweet!
Post other ones if you can!
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