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Old May 7th, 2002, 08:13 AM   #1
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Smile Some Poems that I wrote

Here are some english poems that I wrote. I mainly write Dutch poems since that is my first language so there aren't many good english ones and there might be some spelling faults etc in it.

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Title: A Tear
Written: November 30 2000

A little tear rolls down my cheeck
I can be strong but i'm weak

Silence is surounding me
There is darkness, so that I can't see

Nobody is here
Just one tear

It takes my feelings away
And I just can't stay!

Loneliness is coming soon
to visit me in my room

I am strong, not weak
The tear will dry out, on my cheeck.
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Title: Sometimes
Written: Febuari 2001

Sometimes I feel like the rain
Coming when it's not needed

Sometimes I feel like the sun
Brightly shining, strongly hiding

Sometimes I feel like a star
You cannot reach the heart

Sometimes I feel like the ocean
It can be calm, but also wreckless

Sometimes I feel like a lonely girl
Do I have to face the world alone??
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Title: <none>
Written: June 8, 2001

Do not wait do not fear
The rescue is almost here
No more pain, no more sorrow
You CAN face the day tomorow
Help is on it's way
Tears are not here to stay
You had to wait so long for this
and now it's gone, all that loneliness
This will hunt the pain away
and you can face a brand new
day
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Title: The Path
Written: June 10 2001

There is a path, to a lovely place
There is a path, where we'll walk with a smiling face
There is a path, where we'll walk hand in hand
There is a path, that leads to the love
There is a path, that leads to the clouds above
The Clouds where we will dance on, all night
Where I can hold you, so very tight
To never let you go...
But where is that path? I really don't know.
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Title: I'm all better now
Written: March 07 2002

It took quit some time, but It came
no more pain, sorrow and shame

I have new eyes, a new look at life
don't want to, don't have to take that knife

I got to sleep and wake up with a smile
I haven't felt this way for a while

I faught and found a better way
I've plannend on staying here for a while

No more tears, It has finaly came
The sun was shining and washed it all away
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Sorry if they are a bit depressing. But these where my feelings from the past 2 years. Hope you like them.
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Old May 7th, 2002, 11:59 AM   #2
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Those are very nice poems Female Vivi!
I especially like the first one.
You're very good at writing poems
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Old May 7th, 2002, 12:51 PM   #3
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Arrow Very Good.

Hey, Thats A Nice Thing U Did......... Putting Up Ure Poems.....I Liked All Of Em.. But The Last One I Really Liked. Very GOOD.

Liked Them All...!
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Old May 7th, 2002, 01:19 PM   #4
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Those were really good Female Vivi
I liked them all, I hope to see more of your poems up here
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Old May 7th, 2002, 02:15 PM   #5
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I was kinda doubting if i should put them on here, positive reactions are good :-) thank you
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Old May 7th, 2002, 02:53 PM   #6
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WOW Vivi! Those are really beautiful poems!
You don't have to think people don't like them, because they're incredibly good!
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Old May 7th, 2002, 04:03 PM   #7
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Very Impressive
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Old May 7th, 2002, 04:23 PM   #8
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Oh ! This really means a lot to me. You are the first people who even read these poems :-)
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Old May 8th, 2002, 12:00 PM   #9
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I love your poems Vivi! They're so sweet!
Post other ones if you can!
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