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Mar 16th, 2003, 04:08 AM | #1 |
pazparacolombia
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Blah
Seasons
by Redpyramidhead Sicken me in the presence of a frail goat upon an autumn crossing Thickened thinned blood the sentence of surreal choke upon an autumn crossing And of its wind beautifully intoxicating And tragically the leaves wicked and cursed Colorfully evil and in the essence of this season Beyond, beyond, the blood, the lies, the tears, the leaves, could always choke on one Beyond sickened, the love 'twas 'live, the tears, the leaves, could always choke on one And tragic are the leaves... And tragically the leaves... To glare into Death's eyes with as much fury as one could manage, but only to sink back into one's self And to have not the heart to express emotions of anger into the face of Death, Her softness too powerful, as is the look of care in her eyes Blame lay not with her... Blame lay not with her... Death, who is also Life _RED_ stuff
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Mar 17th, 2003, 10:29 PM | #2 |
goon squad
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Wow, nice work! I love that last line; it adds sort of a twist and intreagues nicely.
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Mar 23rd, 2003, 05:23 AM | #3 |
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Nice expression of resigned anger, melancholy and decay. I also, like Gadzoox, like the last line. But I also like the general feeling of it.
Why did you put "Blah" as the thread's title though? |
Mar 27th, 2003, 02:49 PM | #4 |
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Neat work! Its not my style though but it's still good! Are you a song writer?
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Mar 29th, 2003, 11:08 PM | #5 | |
pazparacolombia
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Yes, very intuitive, nee4life, I write songs and lyrics to those songs. If you look closely, you can sorta tell based on the structure of lines. The chorus is this part
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Actually, I'm not sure why I entitled this thread BLah...I think it was the mood I was in at the time...heh. Thanks guyz for the feedback _RED_ stuff
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