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Mar 16th, 2003, 04:26 AM | #1 |
pazparacolombia
Joined: Sep 2002
Location: Restless dreams...
Age: 43
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Can Opener
Can Opener
by Redpyramidhead Cans of ripe peaches, soft and syrupy Cans of plump tomatoes, red with plushness Cans of lustful fruits for the tongue... All these cans lay about with holes gaping Yet nothing from inside escaping No barrier left to protect what was within Like legs Now opened By the Rending, Tearing of the metal... And what kind of teeth could commit this sin... And what kind of teeth could commit this kind of sin... "With what Red Heresy have this deed you wrought? Applying innuendo to everything in reply to what you've sought And seemingly to everywhere it belongs not" Upon the opening of things, to cherish the beauty and what could flourish within To not spoil what could flourish and not make it become her burden And yet you turn the key of the teeth that could commit this sin... And you turn the key of the teeth that could commit this kind of sin... Rinse, Repeat you say Everyday _RED_ stuff (none are innocent)
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Mar 17th, 2003, 11:01 PM | #2 |
goon squad
Joined: Jun 2002
Location: Canada
Age: 39
Posts: 1,673
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As dark and scary as it is, I like this one the most! I like how it eludes to the true nature of the words; great analogy!
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