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Jun 21st, 2003, 10:49 AM | #1 |
Chokyonim
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Somewhere Soon
Somewhere soon,
a brother will not fall to calling his other a hoe a glistening kiss with a flower for paving their way to go; Somewhere soon, a revolution will rise with the solution and consume all of the hatred that’s grazing with disillusion; Somewhere soon, a man will die and yet another one will be born, while one family rejoices, another one yet will mourn; Somewhere soon, the sun is shining and too will be defining the darkness enveloped on another’s timing; Somewhere soon, a woman will lay her womb down for an abortion due to political-mental contortion and real distortion; Somewhere soon, someone will hit a run n’ gun full court buzzer beater, believe me I know the feeling, there’s nothing sweeter; Somewhere soon, a fiend will take up what will be his final shot his final shot to make it right and that’s all he’s got? Somewhere soon, some emcees will be heating it up on the microphone with tight rhymes that are so ill that even haters cant leave it alone; Somewhere soon, two people will join bodies to the tune of love’s beat to make a night of togetherness feel complete; Somewhere soon, yet another grown man will run from his responsibility don’t make it if you can’t take it, you feelin’ me? Somewhere soon, little grandchildren listen to tales of whales, fish scales and villains, they’re minds are so free- give them ‘til 12 and it’ll hit it’s ceilin’; Somewhere soon, laughter engulfs a person from brain to toe maybe you’ll be lucky and it’ll be you, you never know; Somewhere soon, a head will rest on a window pane filled with lead heavy dread, the road’s been bumpy and God knows what lies ahead; Somewhere soon, curiosity will finally kill that cat, whoever thought that it would have ended up just like that? Somewhere soon, a picture is taken and memories to be cherished are made while the pictures may fade with time, the mental imagery’s here to stay; Somewhere soon, tragedy strikes in places so undeserving, the death and destruction fluctuation’s unnerving; Somewhere soon, a poet will strike it up with the pad & pen to make a perfect blend like I did here once again; Somewhere soon, the rhythmic prose will come to a close abruptly, if so chose... Somewhere soon. |
Jun 22nd, 2003, 04:59 PM | #2 |
Now Im Nothing
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Thats some really cool stuff there man... what was your inspiration for writing this? It is really good... specially the notation.
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Jun 22nd, 2003, 05:37 PM | #3 |
Chokyonim
Joined: Nov 2002
Location: Cincy,OH
Age: 37
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My inspiration? um.. I really didnt.. have one. lol. I just thought of the title, and then I thought.. "wouldn't it be cool if I showed all facets of life but tying it up through the ever prevalent constant, time? So that's what I did... it is basically about how good and bad coexists within the world, and they all run hand in hand. You just have to put it into context. Thanks for the read my friend.
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Jun 22nd, 2003, 06:10 PM | #4 |
Now Im Nothing
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Hey.. i always enjoy anothers work... Really good points that you have in that piece though... Again.. glad to read quality work.
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Jul 1st, 2003, 02:05 PM | #5 |
Chokyonim
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No prolem man, glad you enjoyed. I'll keep posting since you guys like em
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