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[Redpyramidhead]

You do not seem drawn as water
and to even try to adore eyes smaller
than they appear
you're daemons I do not fear
~laugh~
red as fiery demons but not of the passion kind
as no one knows what this means
somehow one could find theirself not a fiend
or atleast not enough to speak of nights
without the colour red
cold winter nights without the colouring of red
left fiending but not by this precious example
oh what a precious little sample
who's spiral does not seem to want to unwind
could not tease it open couldn't be unkind
so no re-attach in the end

You claim to be the Goddess Red
the same who wishes to wage an Ishtar War
renewed through you somehow her strength
but your chakras fail to open to you before
the very destruction your mission has for you
at length

Yet your tattoos are sweet somehow
even though the skin beneath them is abused for now
and the one placed perceptively
and beautifully drawn as you described it perspectively
and it shines lovely
between your neck where travels through your breath
and your heart where unravels true sworn death

Live on

(copyright Mark Skinner 2003)

_RED_ stuff

[trunks69420]

I obey the thread that has bound me and i am glad i did... I dont check here too often but reading your stuff is always a priveledge and entertaining for me... You always have so much depth and storytelling to your stuff... Great job as always my friend

[Piggle_humsy]

Was about to say almost exact thing to trunks.. hmm what shall I say now.. well I dont come here too often either, mostly just check out the gallery but I will try to come here more often.
Your so talented! I wish I could write things like you, but alas my mind is not that deep

Piggle
x x x x

[Lost_myth]

"who's spiral does not seem to want to unwind"

I really like the imagery that this particular line gave and it seems to give a little history to the poem.. maybe you'd talk about the idea of unwinding in something else.. like what's the big deal of unwinding the spiral?

What's happens when you do?
What is the affect the spiral has on this purpose or world by not unwinding?


I'd personally love to hear more of that.. that'd so rock!

BTW, Did u already try to write music for my punk song? Do you still want to???