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The fact you're not telling us why Damien lost house, girlfriend etc, is intentional and you plan to explain later or is it just because you think it's not that important? Because to me, it is. It would be good to have some more details on the main character IMO.
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Yes, I agree with you. I'm not that experienced with writing and noticed this lack of details and stuff just now... But I have lost my motivation and interest for this subject, and I don't think I'll write anymore.