[Pu the Owl]

Originally posted by Carlito
It was a good idea to add more details of thoughts and feelings and less action, so it won't become boring after few chapters.

Oh, I agree so much with these words! That's exaclty what I was thinking while reading the new parts of the story! Maybe I'm repetitive, but you're really improving your story little by little
It's becoming more and more interesting to read.