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Feb 11th, 2002, 05:18 PM	#5
Hylas Now or Never Joined: Jan 2002 Location: Zürich Age: 42 Posts: 2,456	The story seems good, but there are too many dialogues IMO. I mean, maybe adding some more action or descriptions would be nice! So you can add lots of details and stuff! Keep up the good work, your story seems cool!

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