[Uchiha Sasuke]

I dunno man. Being a musician myself I am somewhat disappointed in the turn out. You seem to lack consistancy espically when establishing a simple rythym. I don't know if this was done on purpose or what but there seems to be a lot of mistakes. Now you might of been recording this on the fly, but still man if its your music you should not have a problem playing it. Your tone seems to be suffering to IMO. Atleast listening to it, I don't believe it goes with your singing. Plus some of the distortion is just not needed. Many times it can get tedious and almost annoying, espically when you play in the higher ranges. And also I don't know if this was intention or not, but none of your songs have any structure. They almost seem like ideas tossed together. I dunno if this is your way of being original but I dunno it just doesn't seem to work for me. I mean at first I almost got a Mogwai, Sigur Ros type impression but then it just got to far out. Also the songs lack power. Most of the music I tend to listen to engulfs me with passion and feeling. It could just be your way of singing but I don't gather the same feeling.

I know your goal are high in the music world. Atleast thats the impression I always gathered of you, but I don't know if this is going to work for you now. Atleast the way the music world is now. You might beable to make it as an independent but that might be about it. I don't really know your views on mainstream but if thats what you were planning on shooting for or atleast becoming a successful musician, try writing music with more flare, or something that is more catchy. One more thing, have you looked into better production? I don't know what your using to record or mix but it seems like you might be suffering from it. You might want to look into that in the near future because it could make a world of difference, maybe.