OK this is a good poem because of two reasons
The first reason is that even though it is harsh towards the self you do not fall into the usual trap that some people fall into in poems/stories and go towards self pity. This shows quality in the writing.
The second reason is that (how do I put this) it works! Basically from start to finish it uses good structure and wordage. Thats baout all I acn say on the topic really.
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