That is definately a rap.. because it is ghetto-fied lol. Good job though. hmm let's see.. you definately let ur black side out mark.. I especially like the chorus above all else..
"Judgement! I deny thee! I don't need you anymore cuz you see I have confided in he who has centered off the balance of surreality
REDPYRAMIDHEAD I defy thee!
you wield the blade of my shame and repetitively you try to make me digress from my plot
but these deeds that I have envisioned you wrought
i have made the decision to unmake you with merely a thought!"
It's hardcore, man. I like it a lot.
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All around me are familiar faces
Worn out places Worn out faces
Bright & early for the daily races
Going nowhere Going nowhere
Their tears R filling up their glasses
No Xpression No Xpression
Hide my head I want to drown my sorrows
No 2morrow No 2morrow
& I find it kindof funny I find it kindof sad.
These dreams in which i'm dying, R the best I've ever had
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