Apr 27th, 2002, 07:06 PM
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EVA 00 Pilot
Joined: Jan 2002
Location: NERV
Age: 41
Posts: 2,239
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This part ended too early! You can't do this to poor readers
Now I'm terribly curious!
I like the fact you decided to write this story in first person. I forgot telling you this aspect when reading other parts, but I really like the idea. It gives you the impression you're really involved in the story!
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