Wow! A MGS3 fanfic!
First of all I'd like to say that I'm really happy someone decided to write this and post it here. Second I must add your way of writing is really good, but I think you already know (I think a lot of people besides me told you). Then I also want to say that I'm happy you put Meryl in this fic, and I'm also glad to see there's Ocelot in it too!
Can't wait to read the rest of the story!